
Xtreme chess part 3...Clarence and his guy Sal.
Personally not all too pleased with this one, but it has feet at least.
I had it in my head, it was decent, but then I started doing it and sorta screwed up a lot.... ran out of room to show Calrence's arms were tied up, the dialogue sucks cause I didn't wanna do the same thing I did in the last 2....and yeah...oh well.
Personally not all too pleased with this one, but it has feet at least.
I had it in my head, it was decent, but then I started doing it and sorta screwed up a lot.... ran out of room to show Calrence's arms were tied up, the dialogue sucks cause I didn't wanna do the same thing I did in the last 2....and yeah...oh well.
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 500 x 500px
File Size 51.3 kB
I must say the coloring on the bunny is nicely done though even if all else is for naught.
How about one where a fur is using their tail to play? ^_^
I even say that you should try to
attack this picture again, start fresh
but go with the same idea.
Sometimes things work out better
the second time around.
How about one where a fur is using their tail to play? ^_^
I even say that you should try to
attack this picture again, start fresh
but go with the same idea.
Sometimes things work out better
the second time around.
even though there are things you dont like about it there are still a lot of nice little things going on. you realy get a sence of the foot moving forward. the lines coming off the figures knees realy help activate the backround. another nice thing is the way you are starting to play with deapth of feild. if you are going to play with deapth of feild in the backround you might want to increase the clarity and detail in the foot, if you just add some more of your scrachy highlights instead of smooth modled ones it would read a little better. on the subject of the foot, the loose scribley line on the big toe is wonderfull, the little spiral things on the other toes should not work but they do somehow. even though you loose something of the story without showing the tied hands the overal compositon is stronger, you have this nice circular effect with the directional forces that are created, i think you would loose something of that if the hands were there. since you want to show the hands and you have been doing a couple of these great pictures why dont you just do a little comic of the story. keep up the good work.
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