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The Day the Earth Shifted: Chapter 8
by justawake
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14 years ago
Watched my Badgers lose a heart-breaker in the NCAA tourney a few days ago. Writing this chapter made me feel a little better- quite a bit better actually.
A character from chapter 3 and one from chapter 6 reappear.
My second straight submission with a character named Goldie
prologue: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6683294/
chapter 7: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7362737
chapter 9: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7925842/
A character from chapter 3 and one from chapter 6 reappear.
My second straight submission with a character named Goldie
prologue: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6683294/
chapter 7: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7362737
chapter 9: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7925842/
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the_faceless_one
~thefacelessone
well, that ending came up like a brick wall. sort of stopped rather suddenly. interesting to see you add vore, usually that's my thing. i'm not sure he deserved to die, but he deserved something. keep up the good work.
justawake
~justawake
OP
Since The Games are rigged, the "battles" are over rather quickly (epic battles planned for Act 4). The chapter was long already for not being focused on the protagonist. I wasn't really planning on vore- just seemed appropriate in this situation. Our Badger friend has some growing up to do. He's the youngest character in the story and has some morality issues himself. Thanks again for the feedback- always appreciated.
the_faceless_one
~thefacelessone
rogger that.
the_faceless_one
~thefacelessone
and again: CEO of marlboro heading into the arena? sound like a good idea?
