CO work for Sarkaset from DA of his muscle beauty, Rina. N-joy! ^_^
Rina © Sarkaset
Art © MEEEeeeEEEeeEEEE~!
Rina © Sarkaset
Art © MEEEeeeEEEeeEEEE~!
Category All / Muscle
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 800 x 1280px
File Size 725.7 kB
Oh dear. This is incredible mate! Love the shading and the tones you used. The details on that oriental dress are insane.... not to mention it looks fantastic draped off her well shaped body. Great expression too! ^^ Im thinking I may have to commission you again sometime soon!
I'm not too keen on mimi's (the humans who has animal ears + tail like on this wikipedia page http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nekomimi) myself but you've made it work rather well (again not too keen on the animal ears+tail myself but eh there's nothing that can be done against that). Initial thoughts are that it's looking very good, you obviously know how to make humans as well as anthros in your style which is always a + for me.
I'll open with that the little vains you add in like that always makes me have a little bit of a "detail-fanscreen" you know when girls see their favourite [insert profession here] they go like "EEEEEE~~" . Yeah it's like that it's just silent and in my head, little details like that makes me squeel inwardly of joy. So that is always good ^^
I'm a bit concerned of the how the lights fall on this one though, looking on the tricep and deltriod it seems as though the light is coming mostly upwards/backwards/left (from the WP) whilst the rest of the body seem to follow another lighting source that's forwards/upwards/right if you understand what I'm saying? It seems like you've switched where the lighting is coming from on these two parts alone. I'm also slightly concerned of how the neck muscle seems to like jab into her deltriod muscle, I feel you could've softened it up by removing the line and define it more with shading/highliths instead as you have marvellously done with the deltriod/pectoral area.
I am a bit fan of that dress you made there, especially with the tiny chineese (at least I think it's chineese, I'm not too good at telling chineese/korean/japanese characters apart ^^;; ) It's a very good small touch I enjoy greatly.
Now to the thing that trobules me the most of the picture and that is the leg on the far side of the WP, it feels to me as if you just wanted to get this picture done by the time you got to it because virtually none of it is very well defined.
It's a good overall colourscheme you've chosen also, it makes her appear very warm and soft to the onlooker (AI me here), she's easy for the eyes to look at and take it all in. Good work on it dude.
I'll open with that the little vains you add in like that always makes me have a little bit of a "detail-fanscreen" you know when girls see their favourite [insert profession here] they go like "EEEEEE~~" . Yeah it's like that it's just silent and in my head, little details like that makes me squeel inwardly of joy. So that is always good ^^
I'm a bit concerned of the how the lights fall on this one though, looking on the tricep and deltriod it seems as though the light is coming mostly upwards/backwards/left (from the WP) whilst the rest of the body seem to follow another lighting source that's forwards/upwards/right if you understand what I'm saying? It seems like you've switched where the lighting is coming from on these two parts alone. I'm also slightly concerned of how the neck muscle seems to like jab into her deltriod muscle, I feel you could've softened it up by removing the line and define it more with shading/highliths instead as you have marvellously done with the deltriod/pectoral area.
I am a bit fan of that dress you made there, especially with the tiny chineese (at least I think it's chineese, I'm not too good at telling chineese/korean/japanese characters apart ^^;; ) It's a very good small touch I enjoy greatly.
Now to the thing that trobules me the most of the picture and that is the leg on the far side of the WP, it feels to me as if you just wanted to get this picture done by the time you got to it because virtually none of it is very well defined.
It's a good overall colourscheme you've chosen also, it makes her appear very warm and soft to the onlooker (AI me here), she's easy for the eyes to look at and take it all in. Good work on it dude.
It's rare of me to draw characters like (mimis) as you can tell. I sort of understand what you mean on the light source as I take another look at the picture, mainly concerning the legs too. I see what mistakes I've done on her legs; seeing her outlines were drawn too thick in comparison to the rest of her body and the far back looks totally off and bland. No wonder why you got the impression it looked rushed. I also realized that I drew her bicep a little too far up her underarms as well which makes me go "doh!" XD And the trap also bothers me a bit too seeing they look as if they're "hooked" or latched onto her shoulders and neck (I see what you mean) X3
Oh and for the record, the lettering(s) are Chinese. Since I love writing Japanese, Chinese, and Korean letters, I can tell which origin the letters are XD To me, Korean is the easiest one to tell the difference out of the three.
Thanks again for your useful CC as always! (I know I'm gonna forget to reply to all of your critiques lol) But nonetheless, I've read them at least once while taking notes on my mistakes. X3
Oh and for the record, the lettering(s) are Chinese. Since I love writing Japanese, Chinese, and Korean letters, I can tell which origin the letters are XD To me, Korean is the easiest one to tell the difference out of the three.
Thanks again for your useful CC as always! (I know I'm gonna forget to reply to all of your critiques lol) But nonetheless, I've read them at least once while taking notes on my mistakes. X3
yeah I was about to mention that but since I couldn't recall what the name of the muscle group was that as on the side of the leg I figured I'd just mention the tricep part...
you're welcome dude, it's the least I can do after like 2 months of saying nothing really
A little of a curious question; You seem to be rather into the chineese/far asian stuff, you have any connection to it in any way or are you just a fan?
you're welcome dude, it's the least I can do after like 2 months of saying nothing really
A little of a curious question; You seem to be rather into the chineese/far asian stuff, you have any connection to it in any way or are you just a fan?
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