
i need constructive criticism here, I really want to get better at drawing. Let's start small, what can I do here to make this eye look even better?
Any suggestions will be greatly appreciated.
*moving to scraps or deleting later*
Any suggestions will be greatly appreciated.
*moving to scraps or deleting later*
Category All / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 177 x 160px
File Size 6.7 kB
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The shape is pretty good, but what program do you use? With any, I suggest either shading in lines with white, coming out from the pupil and hitting the edge, then making it 50% transparent if that works, or doing the same thing with a very close but a bit lighter or darker shade of the blue you used for the eye! Ha, long comments.
Constructive criticism, eh? Let's get started!
I really like the shading on the iris, it looks soft and watercolor-ish.
But for some reason, the black specks bother me. They look very... sharp, in contrast with the rest of the iris. Some advice here would be to either get rid of them (although I assume you put them there to add a little more realism or so the iris doesn't look to empty) or try to adjust transparency of certain groups of them so that they appear to blend a bit more with the rest of the iris.
And another thing is that the bottom-right corner of the eye (in reference to the actual image, not to what the eye is seeing) seems out of place, like it goes out too far.
Other than that, this seems well-drawn. I look forward to seeing more of your artwork in my inbox!
I really like the shading on the iris, it looks soft and watercolor-ish.
But for some reason, the black specks bother me. They look very... sharp, in contrast with the rest of the iris. Some advice here would be to either get rid of them (although I assume you put them there to add a little more realism or so the iris doesn't look to empty) or try to adjust transparency of certain groups of them so that they appear to blend a bit more with the rest of the iris.
And another thing is that the bottom-right corner of the eye (in reference to the actual image, not to what the eye is seeing) seems out of place, like it goes out too far.
Other than that, this seems well-drawn. I look forward to seeing more of your artwork in my inbox!
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