FA+
Shop
886
Views
Views
5
Favorites
Favorites
Category
Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 84
File Size 3.6 kB
Report this content
More from DataBank
A continuation on The Meeting and Temple Talk, the full art for this picture is Please Don't Do That by Genesisw, a wonderful snippet of Kivie's exposé.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 120 x 84px
File Size 3.6 kB
Your writing is well paced, has a great structure and the dialogues are engaging and complex while remaining natural (I've seen writers abuse the thesaurus and write complicated sentences just for the sake of sounding smart). That's a great snippet, I want to learn more about this story
Comments