I'm opening this up for a round of constructive criticism before I finalise it.
Current thoughts - something may be off about his nose?
- He might need more hair overlaying the white streak.
- Maybe more contrast on his skin tone?
If anyone has any suggestions, I'd love to hear 'em!
Fenrir Greyback.
Current thoughts - something may be off about his nose?
- He might need more hair overlaying the white streak.
- Maybe more contrast on his skin tone?
If anyone has any suggestions, I'd love to hear 'em!
Fenrir Greyback.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Human
Size 478 x 390px
File Size 267.4 kB
The nose... Its angle and shape suggests to me that perhaps he's just about to transform, and his nose is the first bit to start going wolfy.
Hair... Looks all good to me.
Skin... Yeah, he looks kind of bloodless. More red tones would probably help there. Usually when someone is really angry their face flushes and gets redder than normal. At the moment he looks like the blood has drained away from his face.
Hope that's helpful for you!
Hair... Looks all good to me.
Skin... Yeah, he looks kind of bloodless. More red tones would probably help there. Usually when someone is really angry their face flushes and gets redder than normal. At the moment he looks like the blood has drained away from his face.
Hope that's helpful for you!
Hell, yeah!
I love this picture. I really do.
This actually happens to be the one and only piece of art I have ever seen (thought I looked around a lot) that looks like the Fenrir Greyback I imagined while reading the books. He looks wild, insane and brute, not like some pretty-boy-faced puppy (...).
Really, really great work, even thought you say it isn't even finished yet.
I think the hair's just fine, and the nose! Please, keep that nose. It's perfect fitting.
Hm, yeah, maybe somethings a bit odd with the skincolour, but... sry, I don't really know. :/
Keep it up!
I love this picture. I really do.
This actually happens to be the one and only piece of art I have ever seen (thought I looked around a lot) that looks like the Fenrir Greyback I imagined while reading the books. He looks wild, insane and brute, not like some pretty-boy-faced puppy (...).
Really, really great work, even thought you say it isn't even finished yet.
I think the hair's just fine, and the nose! Please, keep that nose. It's perfect fitting.
Hm, yeah, maybe somethings a bit odd with the skincolour, but... sry, I don't really know. :/
Keep it up!
Yeah, I always found it strange that people have two versions of Fenrir on the internet: prettyboy with maybe a tail or some other faint qualities that really look more like he's a catboy than anything monstrous, or - well, sleazy fat sluggish-looking dude with pointy teeth.
Like, yes, I imagine he's got some chub. It's mentioned in the books. But, to be totally frank, he also runs around like fucking crazy so he'd have to have a lot of muscle there too.
As for finishing this, I'll probably go back to it eventually (when I have my machine back) and retouch the colours, do this in more detail - but for now it's an abandoned work.
Like, yes, I imagine he's got some chub. It's mentioned in the books. But, to be totally frank, he also runs around like fucking crazy so he'd have to have a lot of muscle there too.
As for finishing this, I'll probably go back to it eventually (when I have my machine back) and retouch the colours, do this in more detail - but for now it's an abandoned work.
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