The Black Idol, Part One
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My new comic is finally live. Head on over and read the first issue, 24 pages of... well not horror, a lot of it is character building and suspense.
Tell everybody!
My new comic is finally live. Head on over and read the first issue, 24 pages of... well not horror, a lot of it is character building and suspense.
Tell everybody!
Category All / All
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Size 638 x 825px
File Size 278.8 kB
I loved the very loose similarity to Dead Space in the first few pages of the comic. It gave me something to look for and of course the differences that would make your story very original :P
I wait patiently for your next issue. Given the way you are telling this new story through issues, I suppose I would do well not to grow attached to any characters for several issues?
I wait patiently for your next issue. Given the way you are telling this new story through issues, I suppose I would do well not to grow attached to any characters for several issues?
2 quick points:
1. If it's carbon based you would expect some C14 to be present, unless there was no nitrogen around where it was "built". C14 dating is due to neutrinos forming C14 out of Nitrogen.
2. Laser chess already exists. It's called Khet... and funnily it has an Egyptian theme. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUGPyvyUxnM
1. If it's carbon based you would expect some C14 to be present, unless there was no nitrogen around where it was "built". C14 dating is due to neutrinos forming C14 out of Nitrogen.
2. Laser chess already exists. It's called Khet... and funnily it has an Egyptian theme. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dUGPyvyUxnM
So I am digging this pretty hard so far, but i have to say man, your word bubble format/placement/tails is/are REALLY confusing- page 7 especially confused the shit out of me and took a lot of puzzling to figure out.
it works in bM because usually the characters aren't super far away from their bubbles, and for the most part it was okay in Concession for similar reasons (though when it failed it was for the same reasons as here.)
I can redline a little, if you want, to show you what I mean? as it stands it gets confusing when ALL THE TALKING occurs in one panel.
(all of that said i like the entire-issue-a-month update schedule that you have planned and am looking forward to the next one!)
it works in bM because usually the characters aren't super far away from their bubbles, and for the most part it was okay in Concession for similar reasons (though when it failed it was for the same reasons as here.)
I can redline a little, if you want, to show you what I mean? as it stands it gets confusing when ALL THE TALKING occurs in one panel.
(all of that said i like the entire-issue-a-month update schedule that you have planned and am looking forward to the next one!)
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