Well, themes is good, but you have problem with transition... One theme, then other, you must connecting with more style..

:/ It's kinda like you're just using all the sounds available, it sounds too amateurish

Heh, sounds like a starfighter is flying through this particular orange grove!
*ckk* Stay on target!! ^_^
<_< why's everyone complaining? I thought this was pretty good.

Goddess above, I don't think I've heard a better piece of music since the instrumental version of Andrew Lloyd Webber's Phantom of the Opera! This tune is so bouncy and uplifting and it just goes on seemingly forever. Yeah, there's a lot of different sub harmonies, but rather than seeing that as a weakness, I honnestly think it's what keeps this piece from getting stale, because at a twitch over six minutes, it's one of the longest tunes you've created. The transitions sound just fine to me, in fact they roll so well, one into the next, that it's one of the reasons I'm faving this right now!

Genre: Trance / Sweet Trance

hehe indeed sweet xD

hehe I like it^^ its very up beat. althou a few times i had a hard time fiting it together thru the changes in styles.

lol i kind of imagened flying thru the field wif oranges in tow XD

this is pretty nice#I sorta imagine this song being used in an old-school shooter#in an orange grove o_o;

A bit repetitive. Simple but fun. My biggest problem is the title actually, sounds very unoriginal thanks to the beetles strawberry fields name and junk. If you are set on the theme then I think the first title you had was actually better, more original. I didn’t really have a problem with the transitions. All I could say is try to add more variations on the main melody not just key changes. Good first shot at the genre. A cute, happy tune. ^^

A few samples jump out... a little to varied in some spots. Try and find original samples for the best results. :D

I happen to like sweet/happy pieces like this, so... :)

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Well, you asked for a critic, but I'm not going to shread it. But I will be frank.

This isn't something I'd download to listen to over and over again. But it's not something that'd make me jump to hit the mute button, either.

I'm not too familiar with the trance genre, but in comparison to what I've heard, this has some sort of musical quality that, while still being repetitive, still makes it a bit nice. I think what'd make it really excellent would be more seamless transitions, but I'm not completely sure how you're putting this together, so I'm not sure how I could explain how to better make that happen, sorry.

But it's not that bad. :3 I'd give it 3/5