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While your art is always excellent, it is great to see a lot more plot in this comic than the others, that with 80 plus pages could really be considered a graphic novel. There is one facet of the story that strikes me a bit odd though, which you might consider addressing if you intend to publish this. is why these huge dragonesses would think humans and other tiny creatures would be useful in finding the queen's staff? In just a few steps they could cover the distance that would take a full day for the tiny creatures, and a staff to a giant dragoness would be like a huge tree to the tiny creatures, while the dragonesses could certainly have more luck seeing the large object from their higher vantage point. The story might seem more plausible if only an important, maybe even 'magical' jewel had fallen out of the staff. This might still be larger than a human, but at least it would be small enough that it would be hard for the dragonesses to see in the dense jungle foliage, and therefore there would actually be a reason for employing the tiny creatures to help find it.
Always looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work!
Always looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the good work!
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