okay, so here is chapter one of "Devil She loved". Introducing the main character: Talitha! (Or Tally for short). Before I hear the rantings, yes I do realize this is a bit boring at first but I promise it will get a lot more exciting.
Yes, it is jumpy in alot of places but I had done that in hopes of catching the process of thought. But it's experimental.

The inspirational song for this chapter is: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=saNo.....67F6562084816E

I hope you like it!

(Also, for you who can't read it due to product key here is the link to SF. http://www.sofurry.com/view/300432)