Cute x3
Is that Pocky?! owo

Mew still has quite a bit of Pocky left- Zaniper must have found her very quickly. His prize must be something really special this time. ;3

But... Story End? Now we'll never know if she marries him. ;~;

Mew is surrendering slowly to the love.

pocky OwO

^ THIS. X3

mew surrenders, for now x3

Lawl he'll always find her because she has one particular scent of rejection towards him.

adorable... and..i wonder if you'll draw the bonus ;3




i know a chocolate like that.. if it was french, she eat mikado http://www.videocool.ch/wp-content/....._chocolat.jpeg

Damn that's one persistent Zangoose... Seviper... Zeniper. He is a puzzling creature. It's a shame that the story has to end.

Very cute love story.
They are very great ^^
The last was sweet and sad
This one was funny and sweet >w<
Looking forward to see more

awwww~ soo cute~

Pocky!

This is really cute :3

She must finally say yes this time if it ends :3

Words the same... but he is growing to understand her and her, him. Before long, he may indeed get a yes and find himself on his back, with a certain feline on top of him.

I can understand cutting it here ; it's actually a good cutting point. A bit surprising for the more adult-oriented audience usually found on this site but not every story needs a sex scene and besides, if you do draw Mew 'riding' a male, I think it would be best as either a separate scene from this one or in a new comic.

So, short and sweet.

Also, bonus points for the ending being them warming up to each others rather than a sudden 'YES!' declaration. And nice touch for it becoming a 'in-joke' greeting for each others. In short, well done.


Now for a little question (unrelated but not entirely)...

Noticed you got adult-oriented art in your gallery but also an announcement about not being able to draw adult-oriented art lately. Just wondering how long that would last (if it's still relevent). Likewise, wondering if you'd be open to discussion regarding characters, storylines, and what not. Not necessarely for requests ; just want to share ideas. Just as I commented about your comic and theorized on it, wondered if you'd like to hear about my own ideas and what not.

Thank you for your long comment again. ^^

The cutting point...yes...you know it best why I cutting it at here. because next is mature....

I know it not best to draw Mew 'riding' a male. so that why I in first legendary love story. I'm not draws adult art. But draws mature art. I want to make it romantic of erotic!

Sex is a part of love. Even many people said it is dirty stuff. But all of creature still much have it!

I will make everything cute! Even sex!! Mature ending! >///<

and about your question...

I love to thinking a new character and new story, Thank you to try to help me about it. But please let me thinking about story by myself and give me a best comment like this everytime I make new story. ^^

Well, Mew may not be your stereotypical 'sexy' character but her cuteness can be made in such a way that she have a charm all of her own.

Sex can be dirty. But it vary on how it is shown. And I'm not talking about silly "LOVE! DON'T SHOW ANY SKIN!" non-sense either. Sex is the union of two people' bodies for a short moment, a moment of extreme intimacy. The male and female (sometimes not necessarely that combination) give themselves to each others. There is no shame to be had in pleasure, in sharing one another, in sharing feelings, emotions, and sometimes even perception and memories if only for a moment.

After all... why wouldn't Mew be allowed to have fun? To share this feeling? The very act can be so much more than stock positions, too ; apart from improvizing new positions, from taking advantage of each others' traits... it is also about sharing. No two souls react the same to touch. Each person has its own preferences, its likes and dislikes, things they want to do, things they don't want to do. Varying on the interpretation, sex can either become an art all of itself or be reduced to a mindless, hormonal mechanical motion.


As for comments and stories... well, I will comment whenever I see things to comment on, both your stories and what you say.

As per your request, will keep my actual suggestions in store for later. I'll still theorize and make guesses though, if that's okay with you.


Lookin' forward to the next submission.

OH! Forgot to add this in my comment's original version...

Some criticism about this pic. Although drawing Mew sitting is difficult, I think that the method you used in the second panel didn't work. It feels like you gave her humongous lower legs instead of her usual big hips. I think you should have drawn the hips attached to her body as usual and instead made her feet be a bit underneath the cutting point. You see... the structure of Meww's legs is ovals with a very small lower leg/ankle linking them to the feet (AKA single segment legs).

The other point is a minor one ; her tail is thin but slightly thicker at the base. The way you drawn it in that same panel, it looks like it's much thinner at the base which look kind of wrong and unnatural. I'd suggest slightly enlarging the base to at least match the width of the tail for most of the length.

Just wanted to point that out since you got Mew right in every other pic basically.

I purposely made ​​her appearance as such. To show...She is my mew....As my character....If you notice in my SuicuneXZorua story. You will see that Suicune don't have beard under his chin too. ^^

and about dirty stuff you said.....Thank you for it. even I don't understand some point. Love is hard to understand @w@

This is a rather unorthodox kind of love here, but kinda cute nevertheless. Great work here Vava.

a beautiful story and funny
I loved it appreciates

Cute :3

Haha! So persistant <3

Pocky is gooooood :3