Thats only a third of it? Wow. :)

must say the whole thing was awesome, not by the theme per se, but the evil revenge Trixy just carried... i applaud ya! (and not meaning about the porn, even if was sexless, would be awesome as well)

(Firstly, just going to say this is supposed to be a re-view, not trying to bash on it, I can tell you put allot of effort into it. Just trying to give both my opinion, and generally talk about it. So don't think I'm hating on it or anything. I have this way of speech for about everything.)

Have to say it looks a bit odd with them having human-ish vulva's, (and a bit to large taint distance at times. but impressed by the overall detail it was given at times. Usually just see axe wounds and porn star slits, none was very well endowed, but quite a few average sized.) when the dogs had more canine (or a mix in betwee). Keep in mind the anatomy placement. It follows the spine, not the legs. (was glad to see you pretty much avoided all "stomach vulva" though) Not sure if their mammary glands would really have been in an angle to show, (except P-10 perhaps) sorta ~eh about them not being shown, they're rather small anyhow :P

Overall, sorta well done, expressions and detail was quite good. However really generic and bland in the genre. Gotta say however it managed to have a few interesting parts to it that kept of from being too bland. Even if the rest of it were pretty much just that. Then again, can't blame the story to much, since well... I know many have hard to think outside the box, and people have come to pretty much prefer generic stuff. Can say it technically has a flaw in it, since if I recall right, Pinkie Pie, or Fluttershy was even there when Trixie came to town.

And okay, started writing upon seeing chapter 9, and it did take a rather new turn, but kept the clichés at them. Even if I have to admit some new ideas managed to be thrown in, have to say I didn't expect that heh. Had semi-odd OOC moments, but can be explained most of the time as hypnosis, most of them heh xP Upon further checking it, it did take a few unexpected turns, which was nice to see. Again, anatomy was a bit odd at times with the "hidden genitals" at times, but works technically. And still not sure where to place the anatomy, it's quite mixed between human and feral for both genitals. At least the males.

Have to say it was a rare sight to see use of psychological torture (Ie: get them off as well.) And it was illustrated quite well. Anyhow, P 28 looked really odd imo, body wise and anatomy overall. Male looked weird, (genital placement partially) lack of nipples and off internal (can't blame that one much though, seen one proper equine internal, and most of the rest of them in the fandom isn't really impressive.) Have to say the expressions dropped a few notches, and script became more odd. But the script can't be blamed on the one drawing. Since tbh, it went really derped for a while. Seemed to be going in more forced orgasms direction, but went over to more rape instead. Can't blame it though. Still a bit confused if they're just supposed to be generic, easily manipulated assholes, of if they're actually being mind controlled. First being incredibly common in these kind of fics. Although, the clit sucking was a rare occurrence. And quite surprised you draw rather big clits. Not that common as said to pay attention to the female genital.

46 had a more accurate internal, have to say that surprised me quite allot. Even if the dicks are usually way up in there. (and again, have to say the males look to buff in some PoV's. Also, Trixie looks rather odd facial wise several of time she shows her teeth, smiles or has a tongue visible.) And can say I'm really flabbergasted over the lack of male oral, that's usually the #1 content in things like these, instead we got a... manejob? And plenty of female oral. Did not expect that at all. The mind control seems quite obviously a used plot element, not entirely sure how long it lasts, or what causes it to break, since it seems to really vary.

All and all, have to say it was an above average comic/story illustration, despite having many generic elements. (That's just imo though. And I'm hard to impress.) For people not really caring about story, originally and whatnot, it's prolly a good story if they just want to read about rape, likely might be put off a bit by the female stimulation parts, but there's those that are into that to. To which I can say, it will likely be a really great story to read for those into that sub-genre of this theme. Have to admit though, would have been interesting to see how you'd have drawn male rape, will check through your gallery later when I got time, but noticed the previous one seemed to be female as well. Can randomly say that this one would have been a tad bit more "interesting/real" if there'd been some forced tribadism (scissoring) in it. But again, that falls to the story :P Which seemed to lean towards actually having a point or plot behind it.

Anyhow, hope I didn't ramble to much, and that this seems like a decent review. Have to say I'm overall impressed by the effort and time you've put into this.

That's very interesting to read, and I really liked to read about things you noticed. Doing the project often makes blind to the certain errors, and hearing opinions about them is the only way to develope and correct things. And some of the pages are quite hastily done.

And.. Some of the plot things indeed didn't came out as clearly as propably had should. Though figuring them out by going it through again would be fun as itself.

Thanks for this review. It's very recoursefull, when I'm doing the next part.

Glad to hear it was decently written enough at least then :P And I can relate to going a bit "blind" to detail, I know it happens to be during long sessions of animation heh.

And can say that most of the time, it's quite impossible to see the difference between a stupid male and a male affected mentally some way or another, story wise xP

Anyhow, as said. It also depends what you are okay with drawing. I know some can't stomach drawing anything but white human female porn star vulva, you seem to be rather okay with drawing normal human vulva though, so who knows :P Seemed to aim between a cross of feral and human though with both genders.

This will not end well. But that's why villains do it. Consequences dictate that they will get the everloving everything kicked out of them. So they do what they can while they can.

I see you are of the "irredeemable Trixie" camp. I used to be, before I found a hook and some heart. Now I take a different tack. But always nice to see how other folk interpret.

Please, for the love of god, try to break your image dumps into smaller pieces. It's annoying to see two full pages of nothing but your comic.

Don't worry. That was just a "once in the lifetime" dump.

I hope this was not ended for good..? T'would be unfortunate.

Nah. It's only a first part of the trilogy.

Joy! :)

When;s the next part coming out?

Outstanding! I loved it!

lol, this is so good till now, and i can't wait to see more, if comming :D

It will come. Eventually..

ok, well i at least watched you, so i don't miss out, and all the works you've done so far really made it worth it :D

Damn it this needs more! <3

i look forward to the next part~

I would love to see trixies minions turn on her as well, no filly is safe.