
Work in Progress
Dont mind the crooked nose.
I need your opinions and tips on how to make these eyes right.
I'm not quite happy with either expression.
This is my fursona so I really want him perfect.
I'm trying to go for a sly or coy mongoose expression.
He's a prince so hes regal too.
Also need to make some mock eyebrows. I think going for a nearly devilish style will suit him best.
So what do you guys think?
Dont mind the crooked nose.
I need your opinions and tips on how to make these eyes right.
I'm not quite happy with either expression.
This is my fursona so I really want him perfect.
I'm trying to go for a sly or coy mongoose expression.
He's a prince so hes regal too.
Also need to make some mock eyebrows. I think going for a nearly devilish style will suit him best.
So what do you guys think?
Category Designs / Fursuit
Species Mongoose
Size 963 x 960px
File Size 101 kB
^ THIS!
There's nothing worse for a fursuiter then visibility issues due to the eyes being constructed too small. We wouldn't want the Mangusu to fall off the stage all because he can only see the crowd in his star-struck eyes and not the edge of the stage in front of him (or the stairs for that matter). :)
There's nothing worse for a fursuiter then visibility issues due to the eyes being constructed too small. We wouldn't want the Mangusu to fall off the stage all because he can only see the crowd in his star-struck eyes and not the edge of the stage in front of him (or the stairs for that matter). :)
iIthink the first set of eyes looking ahead are great! Perhaps you could make the top lif a little more closed to give it a coy look? Maybe if you add the eyebrows they will look better and add more expression?
oh wow I shoulda read up first LOL gorehund basically drew what I was trying to say.
oh wow I shoulda read up first LOL gorehund basically drew what I was trying to say.
Eyes can make the character. The most common/popular type of eyes are eyes with whites, colored irises and pupils with the position of the eyes being in the lower part of the iris and close to the middle of the bridge of the nose, looking almost cross-eyed (Which might sound weird) but gives a lot of character.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7448639/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7277411/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7800607
Eyes centered in the middle of the "white" cause a sort of dead-stare effect, or so I've learned.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6731820/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7829430/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7703530/
:D I like the upward facing ones that you designed here the best of the two options.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7448639/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7277411/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7800607
Eyes centered in the middle of the "white" cause a sort of dead-stare effect, or so I've learned.
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6731820/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7829430/
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7703530/
:D I like the upward facing ones that you designed here the best of the two options.
I really love how this suit is coming along I cant wait to see the finished product :) also I think the top left eye set would look good with his personality but Instead of them being wide open I think that if you narrowed them a bit and giving him more or a devious look.
Would you like a redline? Gorehund's is good, I would do it differently but it's a matter of taste. I'm just not really a fan of permanentily raised eyebrows on suits. I like the shape you already used, but would reposition the pupils. Pretty much what Scurrow said.
What kind of eyebrows do you like? Thick or thin? Got any drawings of your character that you really like?
Btw, I really like the shape of the head! Maybe you can deepen out the mouthcorners a bit more, so they show better when furred. I would make the nose a tad bigger too, or it's going to look really small once you fur it. (unless that's what you're going for)
What kind of eyebrows do you like? Thick or thin? Got any drawings of your character that you really like?
Btw, I really like the shape of the head! Maybe you can deepen out the mouthcorners a bit more, so they show better when furred. I would make the nose a tad bigger too, or it's going to look really small once you fur it. (unless that's what you're going for)
Im thinking that adding more eyelid or a different eyelid angle should change the expression. And I agree with Scurrow on furrowig the eyebrows a bit.
To me, a regal expression is slightly looking down the nose but not so much that it is cross eyed, but enough to be slightly snobbish, so Id avoid the central eyes that say "Im a happy pup" and the looking up eyes, theyre too "ohhh i did something wrong, but im cute so dont punnish me"..
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To me, a regal expression is slightly looking down the nose but not so much that it is cross eyed, but enough to be slightly snobbish, so Id avoid the central eyes that say "Im a happy pup" and the looking up eyes, theyre too "ohhh i did something wrong, but im cute so dont punnish me"..
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