good chapter, an interesting bit of information! wtf, Chris has a rocket launcher, LOL! XD

Heh, heh, well he had to have some way of protecting the cafe "in case of emergency." XD

*shakes his head and laughs* XD

...Well, I'm hooked. I'm actually rather anxious for the next chapter now!


Heh. I'm guessing you like Dragonforce? I noticed the street the CD shop is on is called ZP street, and I thought it might have been a reference to ZP Theart.

I'm also pretty sure that the line 'Well then if it disturbs you then just go away' from chapter 6 is a 'Ten thousand fists' reference.

Well, I'll be honest with you that it was a little sketchy at first, but I have to say; by Ch.23 I could really see your writing style beginning to pick up! And whether you intended it or not, I think 27 said a lot about you personally. (Heh, I spotted two scalies in Ch.28! Yay! ^_^)

...*facepalm* And I probably should have seen the spiritwolf homage coming a mile away, but I was just too engrossed to notice. I guess it might have something to do with the fact that I've never been a big fan of his poetry. I hate to brag (actually that's a lie. I hate to downplay others when I do it, though), but I've always kind of thought mine, Osiris', Greyraven22's, and Kakani's was much better.

And speaking of my little writing buddies, I've been thinking about starting a little club here on FA, and I think you qualify. It's still just a concept, but I'll be posting a journal on it soon to get up some input from the rest of the community.

Oh, and PS:
I'm just going to fav this chapter b/c it would be an astounding pain in the ass to have to go back and fav each chapter individually. Just consider this one to count for all of them.

Thanks for the comments and the fave. ^^ Glad to hear you like it, and the club sounds interesting. :3

No prob. And I have that journal up now, so you can probe a little further into the idea, if you're interested.