OK the bee stinging isn't the biggest part of the story but it is the emotional climax, read the first part The Smooze in order to fully understand the plot
While it is a fun story, I wanted to know where the bees came from and why they wanted Ichabod. It just seemed all normal until "OMG BEEEEEEES." Still, it was very flattering that you wanted to use this type of scenario in your story. Thanks.
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