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The world has changed since the T.O.O.N. hit, and some have a harder time coping with the change to cartoony physics than others.
This is based entirely off of pablote's fantastic T.O.O.N. series. I apologize for lack of real descriptive inflation in this story, but if I ever continue I'm sure it will come, so sorry if that's not your thing. XD
(P.S. had a tough time uploading this for the longest time, hope you all like it!)
This is based entirely off of pablote's fantastic T.O.O.N. series. I apologize for lack of real descriptive inflation in this story, but if I ever continue I'm sure it will come, so sorry if that's not your thing. XD
(P.S. had a tough time uploading this for the longest time, hope you all like it!)
Category Story / Inflation
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 24 kB
Ooooh, I've never had someone write something based on something I wrote before :)
I liked how you incorporated some of my ideas and injected some of your own, but wrote the whole thing from a first person perspective. I write my stories from an omniscient third person perspective to bring more attention to the world itself, whereas this story, with its internal dialogue and whatnot, has a much more personal feel to it.
I, for one, welcome more chapters and/or stories.
I liked how you incorporated some of my ideas and injected some of your own, but wrote the whole thing from a first person perspective. I write my stories from an omniscient third person perspective to bring more attention to the world itself, whereas this story, with its internal dialogue and whatnot, has a much more personal feel to it.
I, for one, welcome more chapters and/or stories.
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