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Some may have noticed by now that I dont always give the Druid forms ALL of their bobbles and trinkets.. Like Shai doesnt wear the collar. Sometimes I think they are just overly complicated when they dont need to be, and surely the Druids would like to look different from one another with their own style and preference as to what they wear in whatever form they are taking at the time.
Anyhow, the page is up. http://druids.thecomicseries.com/comics/
Anyhow, the page is up. http://druids.thecomicseries.com/comics/
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The Death Knight class truly fits her, lol. I mean, look at that "innocent" smile on the 5th panel, clearly she's trolling him! It would've been a nice touch if we saw her patting him on the head on the 5th panel hahaha. I wonder how our heroes' next encounter will be after hearing that story. It certainly sets it up nicely for some more romancing. Either that or danger is in the air, since Kinar is taking longer than usual...
Art-wise, you're doing great. Really, there's nothing I see wrong, with the small exception of something weird going on the tent, but I don't know what it is. Maybe I'm not looking at it right, lol. If it's Victor's shadow casting over the tent, then it's fine, but giving it a more organic shape and having it trail from his feet, would help define it. If it's a perspective problem, then yeah, its a big one, but doubt its that.
Overall, your lines are getting much smoother and natural, and the form keeps improving on every page! Big improvement on expressions as well. Each and every one of them clearly shows what they're feeling from that alone. The story is great, and the way you tell it is even better. Keep it up!
Art-wise, you're doing great. Really, there's nothing I see wrong, with the small exception of something weird going on the tent, but I don't know what it is. Maybe I'm not looking at it right, lol. If it's Victor's shadow casting over the tent, then it's fine, but giving it a more organic shape and having it trail from his feet, would help define it. If it's a perspective problem, then yeah, its a big one, but doubt its that.
Overall, your lines are getting much smoother and natural, and the form keeps improving on every page! Big improvement on expressions as well. Each and every one of them clearly shows what they're feeling from that alone. The story is great, and the way you tell it is even better. Keep it up!
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