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I've been able to take this much farther than I originally hoped, which is definitely a good thing. Longest story I've written in quite a while, and still kind of unfinished. If you think it's crap, feel free to say so, as long as you've read through the whole thing. I wouldn't mind some negative feedback so I at least know what I might be doing wrong.
Category Story / Transformation
Species Feline (Other)
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 9.8 kB
it is well-written, especially from a grammatical and technical point of view. The only thing odd is how jumbled everything is. Most of the time i had no idea what was going on... It was Almost disorienting. Though it might just be me who is struggling to keep up with what was happening.
I knew there was a distinct possibility of blazing through what I had in mind far too quickly. Really, I'm not used to writing at any length about things, so this was some major experimentation on my part. Anyway, don't feel bad about not being able to keep up with everything, as it'll take a lot more experience for me to get a feel for the right pacing.
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