Hey there, I just caught this on the front page. Figured you could use some critique while this is still in pencil test phase.

You're not countering anything. The shoulders need to counter the hips and the head needs to counter the shoulders. Your contact hips arn't rising. Head's not following through.

Hey may i ask what you mean by countering? im an animation fan although i havent really actually Made anything yet.... Lol

If your right hip is favoring the weight... meaning... if your right leg is supporting your weight than your right hip will be higher than your left. Stand up and do it. Now watch what happens to your shoulders. They counter the action. Your right shoulder rolls down to "pinch" at your higher hip... and the gap between your left hip and left shoulder gets bigger. Your head also counters the action. When you walk... your hip favors the direction of whichever leg you are leading with, and in turn... the shoulders will rotate. Take several steps and pay attention to what is happening to your body... how it's turning, ect.

-Cat

OH! I think I see what you're talking about! I was wondering that,too. "wtf is he talking about? Countering?" but now I see the problem. His hips and shoulders do look too stiff and his head is bouncing all over the place. I'll see what I can do to fix this. Thanks for the critique, man. I wish I get more of them.

Smooth!