Really, a lot of it is fine, if not great. But I see ONE problem. The muzzle needs to connect to the neck, like round it a bit. But the body, wings, and especially the feet look amazing man!

Really? Thanks for the input, I would have completed the wings, but I actually ran outta space one the paper I was drawing... And I'm my own worst critique when I say this, but to me, the legs look a bit off, the muzzle I agree with you is off, but hey it's my first time actually drawing this, now I need another favor, could you critique my other one? The one that I revised about 3 times already, but don't critique the actual drawing, critique the coloring ability, cause I had a friend request this for me, and I told him not to color it
TMI >_< sorry bout that, but could you do that for me?

Of course I would!

Actually, which one are you talking about? This will sound VERY lazy, but can you link it so I know which one?

It's... the only one that I have with color on here :s

oh and here, it's the link http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7804215/

i like the wings and outfit

Thanks :3
It took me a while to try and draw it, it's a shame I don't know where the picture is anymore >_<

yeh i hear you my older traditional ones i like can't find either

That's not gonna be happening with my newer ones.

i moved on to Ms paint Paint but on occasion i do traditional elsewhere offline but don't post it much anymore I'm left handed and doing traditional coloring etc puts too much pressure on my left hand so i taught myself to draw and color with mouse on Ms paint in 2011 it's less pressure for my writing hand i write with my left hand