Laguna and Ora sitting on a rock in a pond having a moment of tranquility. Laguna is small here, but he can change his size and Ora is about 13 years old. She is small for her size so she could I suppose appear to be 10. I don’t want to spoil too much of that though for the comic. I like cows and it was nice to finally draw the beasties. Cows are cute >w< Laguna, Ora, and the cows are all cell shaded. The background is digital work made in Adobe 7.
I was about to go watch South Park and the Iron Giant when I remembered that I should also submit this piece here besides my DA account. Here is a Link to the image in my DA account - http://axolotl-mafia.deviantart.com.....isdom-65961838
Comments and critique welcome as usual :3
Ora and Laguna are characters of Water and Metal the Dragon Pearl Saga. Story and characters are copyright to me, Rheann K. Thow. All rights reserved.
I was about to go watch South Park and the Iron Giant when I remembered that I should also submit this piece here besides my DA account. Here is a Link to the image in my DA account - http://axolotl-mafia.deviantart.com.....isdom-65961838
Comments and critique welcome as usual :3
Ora and Laguna are characters of Water and Metal the Dragon Pearl Saga. Story and characters are copyright to me, Rheann K. Thow. All rights reserved.
Category Artwork (Digital) / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1221 x 956px
File Size 1.73 MB
If I had to come up with some sort of critique, I would suggest you to pay closer attention to the contrast of shadows and the colour of light. Currently the central characters stand out pretty much. If you could see a shadow of the trees or some sunny highlights on their skin they would be more clearly part of the overall image.
I'm not saying I have any idea of how to create such an effect myself, it's just something I thought of. Your ability of picking colours and drawing details and textures is very impressive. It encourages me to improve my own skills. =)
I'm not saying I have any idea of how to create such an effect myself, it's just something I thought of. Your ability of picking colours and drawing details and textures is very impressive. It encourages me to improve my own skills. =)
It's difficult to see but there is some reflection on their skin, though I agree entirely that I could have gone much further with such detail and also added more shadow. At the time I wasn't really sure how to do it as I've never attempted a scene like this before =)It was very challenging lol.
Thank you very much for the critique, it was very helpful and hopefully I can apply it to future images =D
Thank you very much for the critique, it was very helpful and hopefully I can apply it to future images =D
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