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A second piece of microfiction from 
hitchingforwords' prompt asking for 55 words or less.
The moral is don't build a sorry shack of a strip bar next to/under an overpass on the busiest highway in the county.
hitchingforwords' prompt asking for 55 words or less.The moral is don't build a sorry shack of a strip bar next to/under an overpass on the busiest highway in the county.
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Interesting post actually, considering I've never really been a fan of microfiction. I tend to find it is too vague, but here you manage to paint a scene with some progression moving through it. Anyway, I think this is an amusing piece that lives up to its apt title, and I enjoy how your sentence structure seems to echo poetic form. Well done! I'd love to see a short story from you. =)
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