It's a good pin-up to me. I like the poses for the girls, but the only distracting (in a bad way) part are their expressions. None of them look particularly happy to be in the picture. Britanny's tail seems to be missing also. :X

So you replaced the black line art with colors that matched the clothing and body parts for where you were coloring? I've always liked that effect.

yeah i need to get better at drawing expressions.

not only did i forget the tail i forgot to draw bianna's face mark.

LOL

What's with the "death metal" expressions?

i rushed this pic to meet a deadline. if i had more time i would have started over...

Lovely fanart. :3

thanks! i can now draw these girl without looking at something else.

Understandable. Look at what they're wearing! :3p

LOL... that took me a while to get but i finally got it!

Very lovely.

thanks!