Chapter 4 of the PMD RP with Zwei. This is really getting fun.

This is actually the first time I've had to describe an evolution in any kind of detail. I'd literally never thought about how it'd feel, so it was with a sense of genuineness that I wrote David's uncertainty. The side effect of evolution -- that our characters would be stuck as Pokémon permanently -- wasn't something I'd gone into this expecting, either, so I felt that David's trepidation was fairly genuine.

And for the record, I know that Riolu typically can't use Aura Sphere. But of course, David wasn't a typical Riolu, so I think his improved control over his Aura makes a certain amount of sense.

Anyway, I hope you enjoyed. Feedback is greatly appreciated, though I'd like to ask for a bit more detail than just 'good job'; leave your comments below, and I'll see you guys at Chapter 5.


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David belongs to me