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So I've been on a bit of a 'Found' bender recently 3 pages in 1 day is probably a record, but this specific page took me waay longer than most.
I decided to experiment on found and return it to its 'coloured lines' origins *the original pages used to be drawn witb coloured lines do you think it looks better or worse or no difference? I'd appreciate feedback.
I've also decided from here on in i'm going to try my hardest at the page. some of the pages are rushed and I want to stop doing that. I want a good quality comis and so i cant get blaise about how i draw it.
On a completely seperate note..im realy happy with the glugging wineglass. I feel really proud of that and I dunno why
So I've been on a bit of a 'Found' bender recently 3 pages in 1 day is probably a record, but this specific page took me waay longer than most.
I decided to experiment on found and return it to its 'coloured lines' origins *the original pages used to be drawn witb coloured lines do you think it looks better or worse or no difference? I'd appreciate feedback.
I've also decided from here on in i'm going to try my hardest at the page. some of the pages are rushed and I want to stop doing that. I want a good quality comis and so i cant get blaise about how i draw it.
On a completely seperate note..im realy happy with the glugging wineglass. I feel really proud of that and I dunno why
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Love it!~ <3
Also, I prefer a more stylized comic. I feel that if you took the colored lines and practiced more you wouldn't need to backbone of black lines to make an amazing comic.
Still amazing either way, I especially love the tail on Gem on the 2nd to last panel and the Wine pouring.
Yeah, that wine pouring is beautiful. :)
Also, I prefer a more stylized comic. I feel that if you took the colored lines and practiced more you wouldn't need to backbone of black lines to make an amazing comic.
Still amazing either way, I especially love the tail on Gem on the 2nd to last panel and the Wine pouring.
Yeah, that wine pouring is beautiful. :)
yeah, everything about this comic pleases me c: i think the colored lines fit it very well! why not just switch it up between the colored lines and the black ink lines? you could use them for scenes to show more serious emotions and situations instead of lighter situations (a nightmare or horrifying regression as opposed to a cute little date like this?)
Ooo this looks great, I think. I really like the colored lines look. It looks warmer and smoother. I saw the first panel and just went "wow!" I notice you are using black lines for their facial features but colored lines for everything else, as in this recent drawing, which I also thought looked really good.
The wine being poured does look really good. The colored lines really make it look like wine being poured into a wine glass (or any liquid being poured into a round glass of course).
Stupid bottle! :D Anyway, I'm sure havoc is about to descend, but things look like they're going well so far, and hey, we learned a bit more about Paul!
Index updated, too. :)
The wine being poured does look really good. The colored lines really make it look like wine being poured into a wine glass (or any liquid being poured into a round glass of course).
Stupid bottle! :D Anyway, I'm sure havoc is about to descend, but things look like they're going well so far, and hey, we learned a bit more about Paul!
Index updated, too. :)
I would say here I think it looks very good when they are standing or walking , however in my opinion the last panel looks like something optically weird ,, I shall try to say what I mean by that & hope you can understand
the couch sitting pose looks okay however the flatness of the coloring makes it look like 2 paper/cardboard figures cut out dolls placed up top a vinyl colorforms
also she does look gorgious
the couch sitting pose looks okay however the flatness of the coloring makes it look like 2 paper/cardboard figures cut out dolls placed up top a vinyl colorforms
also she does look gorgious
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