On the Hunt
Here's my OC again this time i finalized his design ^^
i would like to thank my friend here
synister &
nasuki for helping me for the idea :D
No background version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8207257/
!!!GOT FEATURED IN 'DAILY DEVIATION'!!!
http://today.deviantart.com/dds/?day=2012-06-23
i would like to thank my friend here
synister &
nasuki for helping me for the idea :DNo background version: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8207257/
!!!GOT FEATURED IN 'DAILY DEVIATION'!!!
http://today.deviantart.com/dds/?day=2012-06-23
Category Artwork (Digital) / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1109 x 1280px
File Size 140.3 kB
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Yeah, as always stated this artwork turned out so utterly beautiful~<3 *smirks*
The fur in the picture is really well done and I love those details like the markings, the red areas around the eyes and of course the whole outfit in general :D
Such a well done character design, just can't wait to see him in action :D
And by the way, I prefer the version with the background much more~<3 It's really a calm scenery, like he's hunting something or someone :3 Never let your guard down ;) *winks*
The fur in the picture is really well done and I love those details like the markings, the red areas around the eyes and of course the whole outfit in general :D
Such a well done character design, just can't wait to see him in action :D
And by the way, I prefer the version with the background much more~<3 It's really a calm scenery, like he's hunting something or someone :3 Never let your guard down ;) *winks*
thank you so much
im very happy that the new technique turn out very well ^^ and thanks for your suggestion for my character
and yeah i really do love splatting colors to my artwork, to make the color of scenery XD
he is using his senses to hunt his prey that's why his looking around ^^
im very happy that the new technique turn out very well ^^ and thanks for your suggestion for my character
and yeah i really do love splatting colors to my artwork, to make the color of scenery XD
he is using his senses to hunt his prey that's why his looking around ^^
I feel awkward critiquing awesomeness again >.<. I actually feel like I'm nit-picking... But here it goooooes!
How do I start... Hm... I don't know exactly how you can do it, but thanshuhai (that's your OC's name right?) blends a bit too much with the background. By that I mean, though depth has been established through perspective, depth in terms of focus could still be improved. I think, I'm not sure, but sharpening the edges/outline would help.
Actually, the upper half if good. The lower part looks like the "camera" taking the scene is out of focus. Like how the fuzziness/blurriness of his left knee is somewhat too close to the blurriness of the rock to the left. Making it seems like they have the same depth. Same with the left foot. It doesn't feel like it's stepping on the ground. The tail overlapping the left leg also seem to flatten with the BG (although, the version of this with a plain white BG seems ok).
Crap I dunno how to really say it :|... I mean like here,
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8197344/
Everybody seems to pop out from the BG
Or this... I feel awkward using this as an example but seeing that you get a lot of influence from this style but what the heck...
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8214888/
Note that the tail is prominently in front of the wooden post. The same could be said for the 2nd fox behind the net (Also, even if the net does not overlap the 2nd fox, it is obvious that the 2nd fox is behind the net.
Looking at it again, maybe its because of too much green reflection? I dunno :P. I'm not remotely good enough to be sure :P
HTH
How do I start... Hm... I don't know exactly how you can do it, but thanshuhai (that's your OC's name right?) blends a bit too much with the background. By that I mean, though depth has been established through perspective, depth in terms of focus could still be improved. I think, I'm not sure, but sharpening the edges/outline would help.
Actually, the upper half if good. The lower part looks like the "camera" taking the scene is out of focus. Like how the fuzziness/blurriness of his left knee is somewhat too close to the blurriness of the rock to the left. Making it seems like they have the same depth. Same with the left foot. It doesn't feel like it's stepping on the ground. The tail overlapping the left leg also seem to flatten with the BG (although, the version of this with a plain white BG seems ok).
Crap I dunno how to really say it :|... I mean like here,
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8197344/
Everybody seems to pop out from the BG
Or this... I feel awkward using this as an example but seeing that you get a lot of influence from this style but what the heck...
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/8214888/
Note that the tail is prominently in front of the wooden post. The same could be said for the 2nd fox behind the net (Also, even if the net does not overlap the 2nd fox, it is obvious that the 2nd fox is behind the net.
Looking at it again, maybe its because of too much green reflection? I dunno :P. I'm not remotely good enough to be sure :P
HTH
thank you soo much for the critic. ^^
yeah i think i really made the character blend to the background.. i think it was the lighting i made & tone (well i used the same tone i used with the character) so that make sense now ^^. the technique/shading i used for the char work pretty well but for the background well i still need to improve and making things more sharper (also for the character). i kinda messed up with the proportion while drawing this.. also have a lot of re-dos..
thank you again for the critic its really appreciated for me to know my mistakes & i really do apply apply it for my future artworks :)
haha yeah silverfox do influenced me with his style XD
yeah i think i really made the character blend to the background.. i think it was the lighting i made & tone (well i used the same tone i used with the character) so that make sense now ^^. the technique/shading i used for the char work pretty well but for the background well i still need to improve and making things more sharper (also for the character). i kinda messed up with the proportion while drawing this.. also have a lot of re-dos..
thank you again for the critic its really appreciated for me to know my mistakes & i really do apply apply it for my future artworks :)
haha yeah silverfox do influenced me with his style XD
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