
I found the PERFECT grey paper in the shop around the corner 8D
I LOVE it ~ since drawing with pencil and highlighting with white is so much fun. I did much more then this 3 drawings, but the other stuff looks like shit XD
And yeah. Fanart: Brooklyn from Gargoyles. He isn't my favorite from the show, but somehow i wanted to draw him.
I LOVE it ~ since drawing with pencil and highlighting with white is so much fun. I did much more then this 3 drawings, but the other stuff looks like shit XD
And yeah. Fanart: Brooklyn from Gargoyles. He isn't my favorite from the show, but somehow i wanted to draw him.
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Portraits
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BROOKLYN! :D
And although I love the details, man something just looks crooked about his perspective. I think his eyes are too close to being on the same plane, the one on the left needs to be recessed a bit more maybe.
I'm no artist, but I know what I like! and I like how you did him, despite my criticism :3
And although I love the details, man something just looks crooked about his perspective. I think his eyes are too close to being on the same plane, the one on the left needs to be recessed a bit more maybe.
I'm no artist, but I know what I like! and I like how you did him, despite my criticism :3
The dino doodle, I have seen many people do this incorrectly (even I do it sometimes still!). The angle of the jaw, you would not see the inside of it at all. Also, the back of the jaw where it joins into the head is thick. I would recommend looking up fossils for reference. Their jaw muscles are massive! Also, the eye is a little too far down; just needs to be moved up a tad. Brooklyn needs his mouth line to be a little downward. Once again, look up references to see the forms that the skeletons would create. Your shading and highlights is your strength, so it creates enough form to hide these little mistakes. The right doodle seems to be fine. There is not anything noticeable right off the bat to me.
Hope that helps!
Hope that helps!
Thanks for that critique! I knew there was something wrong with the jaws (on both pictures) I used a little dino-toy as reference for the first one, but i guess i'm not good with RL references (i changed my viewpoint or something). For the ape i used several fotos - this works the best for me. And for brooklyn. This is ref-free. And all wrong - as i see know X,x Gosh i hate when this happens.
But srly. Thanks! critique like this is really useful :)
(and i don't mind the reply thing~)
But srly. Thanks! critique like this is really useful :)
(and i don't mind the reply thing~)
OMG Brooklyn *_*
OMG *fansqueee* Meine lieblingsserie damals und heute immernoch. Eine Schande dass sie nirgends läuft und man sie nicht auf DVD kaufen kann. Zum Glück hab ich sie dennoch.
Mein Liebling war Brooklyn immer zusammen mit Goliath, zumidnest nach Bronx, den fand ich immer so wahnsinig niedlich XD
OMG *fansqueee* Meine lieblingsserie damals und heute immernoch. Eine Schande dass sie nirgends läuft und man sie nicht auf DVD kaufen kann. Zum Glück hab ich sie dennoch.
Mein Liebling war Brooklyn immer zusammen mit Goliath, zumidnest nach Bronx, den fand ich immer so wahnsinig niedlich XD
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