Honestly, there's not much wrong with this... the only thing I can think of is the right eye being bigger than the left, slightly (as in her right eye, not the eye on our right).

Um... other than that, it just seems too real/boring to me. Maybe it's your style. Not saying I could do better, though. >.>;;

omg, I just realized, she has no eyebrows! o.o;;

and I don't see how it's "animal related non anthro"

I didn't really know what topic to put her under