Chronos reminds me of my OC alicorn Astralus, they are different, but have some similarities. As for the story itself, it's hard to make a judgement from just the prologue. I say don't give up. I'll keep an eye out for your next installment and comment on it. Some friendly advice: Give the story a real title and, if you can, a thumbnail. It should increase the number of views you get.

Thank you the next one will be out as soon as I get more time