I think that this story is really good! Well done!

Ohhh, so many things that I'm enjoying about this story. The first of course being that the macros arn't made out to be invincible. They can be hurt, they can be killed. Even if they do have a drastic upper hand on normal civilians. And in this case, they have a hero to help tip the odds in their favor, in the form of Kane. :) Which is a really neat concept. Seeing as how he can control his transformations to an extent. And doesn't become a mindless killling machine. :)

Another thing I really love is Kahn's part in the story. And his temperment as a whole.. It seems like there are fewer and fewer gentle macros out there. And fewer still with a form as fearsome as his. So needless to say, it's really endearing to see him playing such a protective role. :)

As for the literary side of things. I don't think your giving yourself enough credit. Because honestly, I think your doing a pretty good job at describing everything and weaving it all together. Heck, the only real problem I see so far is that the chapters have been so short. And that there arn't more of them! Would really love to see what comes of the two characters. And how their friendship/relationship will form. :)

Coming from you this is a great compliment, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I do intend to write another chapter, I just haven't had the time. But I do have a few ideas and I plan to reveal more of Kane's past.

*Smiles* Well I've always been a firm believer in calling it as I see it. I'm just sorry it's taken me so darn long to reading them. Eh, time is never on our sides it seems. But on that note, I finally got the chance to go through the your picture gallery. As I'm sure you noticed, by all the favorites. ^.^ Looot of scenes that I really enjoyed. And if I didn't know better, I'd say you were almost as big of a paw enthusiast as I am. :)

Who knows, Maybe I am. When it comes to certain kinds (ex Bear, Tiger) I just can't get enough of them. And I do love a good Macro/Micro Foot oriented story.