I also tried shading on the characters too, but first time and I don't think its perfect...but I have no regrets over the shading I did. (:

*hiding an whispering* what do we do?

Arinira: I-I don't know yet, we have to watch out...she is strong. 'Whispering'

*whispering* . . . .ill distract him so you can escape

Arinira: No, we were told to investigate the base along with our friend that sneaked inside...oops I think I spoke a bit loud. D:>

'Zavia heard them and approaches the boxes'

*whispering* what do we do????????

Arinira: I thought you knew what we were going to do...Shade. ):

*whispering* I gotta distract him or were dead

Arinira: Her you mean- uh oh, you have no time to distract now...she is beside the boxes now. 'whispering'

'Zavia concentrated on listening what they were saying but couldn't make it out and passes by the boxes...but saw the 2 of them running inside the base'

*cornered* (thinking: she hasnt noticed me yet. if i can keep quiet. . . .)

'Zavia didn't see you but runs in to chase after Arinira and Shade'

*comes up behind her and pins her to the ground* AHA!

Zavia: You have some nerve to stop me. ):<

'Zavia used 'Slash' knocking you off her'

*eevee was knocked unconscious* uuhh.......

(an hour later)

uuuuuuhhh......where am I?

'You look around and saw you were in a town'

(You probably were taken here, while you were unconscious)

*gets up* h-hello?

'No answer came except the cool breeze passing by'

'But was in luck when you see 2 Burrly called Yousaf and Yojuna running by but saw you'

Yousaf & Yojuna: Hi there. :D

(Yousaf and Yojuna are twins and are more of my characters, you may find them in my gallery somewhere)

w-where am i? i must return to an important mission

Yousaf: Oh you mean the mission Arinira and Shade are doing?

Yojuna: If you going back there its past that field over there. ^_^

'Yojuna points over to a field where the building was, where you were knocked out'

Yousaf: I hope those 2 are doing okay at their mission too. ):>

Yojuna: I worry about those pokemon, I wonder why they work so hard. '.'

Yhx *sprints past the field*

'You appear back at the building or base you were knocked out at'

(Be careful this time)

hmm...*enters with caution*

'Nobody was around as you enter inside'

*hides*

'You see nobody'

*looks in a journal of his memories* what was the mission? I know I wrote it down

'A spy camera saw you from the corner of a wall and you didn't notice'

Hmm.....nothing? . . . . Hello? somebody help me

'Dylon walks past, he notices you'

Dylon: Why are you here? you know you aren't aloud here without permission? ):<

(Dylon is a member of this base same as zavia...he's a Pikachu, who usually helps others escape if none of the other members are around)

Im sorry, i appear to be lost

Dylon: Huh, so you want out safely...but you came through that door...what could you possibly be lost about? Wait a second, you are one of those pokemon investigating our base...well, I can't allow you to pass. ):<

. . . . *pounces and eats him whole* stay quiet and I wont digest you

'Paralyzes you making you spit Dylon back out'

Dylon: Eating me won't stop me...but I guess, I could let you pass...I ain't as bad as my friends.

'throws a cheri berry at you healing you from paralyzis then left to tell a lie to his leader'

thank you. . . *wonders what his missio was* hmm.....

'You remember it was to distract Konan the Fraxure' D:

no no no......hmm....what were we doing before I they left me?. . . .aw well, maybe I should check the prison chambers. . . .* stealthily searches for the prison*

'You soon find the prison chambers and finds someone locked up'

Hello?

???: Please help me! I was captured by that mean Fraxure for some reason...and I don't know why?

hmm... *looks for a key*

???: Are you looking for the key? I am so sorry but that Fraxure has it...he made sure nobody let me out.

there has to be a reason. Dont worry, im not with them. You can tell me

???: I know you aren't...you don't wear the jackets like they do...I am Burgundy by the way.

(Burgundy is my pokesona)

*dont worry ill get you out.....*hears somebody coming and hides* get their attention*

'Ainsley comes in, another member of the base'

Ainsley: I thought I heard talking...or was it you talking to yourself again?

'Looking towards Burgundy'

Burgundy: No sir...I was just mumbling to myself...thats all.

Ainsley: I'm not convinced, you sounded like you were talking to someone else...cos I heard a different voice.

'Looks around and saw a tail round the corner of the prison chamber'

*knocks out Ainsley*

'It failed as he blocked the attack from the eevee'

Ainsley: So it was you. D:<

(You have to think of something...you can't eat Ainsley, he's much too big and he's somehow powerful...so watch out. D:)

*punches him in the stomach and puts him in a head lock* listen, i dont wanna fight you, and you dont want to fight me, so give me your jacket and forget this whole thing ever happened

Ainsley: Urf, fine...go ahead and pass...taking mine or another members jackets won't work...cos Konan will still recognise you as an intruder. ):|

damit....thanks though *takes his jacket*

'Ainsley takes his jacket back'

Ainsley: I said it won't work ):| But I'm sure another pokemon is investigating too...and might be in trouble if you don't help.

(Ainsley you grumpy and evil thing...but its true what he says)

just tell me where my friends are

Ainsley: They are through that door I came in.

'Points his paw in the direction of the door he came in'

Thanks......anyone over there?

Ainsley: Yes, your 2 friends...and my fellow leader, Konan the Fraxure...but like be careful...he has a strong move called Dragon Claw.

damn....well thanks. Names toby. Dont tell anyone im here

Ainsley: Well sure -_-, (Konan will probably be mad at me. DX)

'You come across a huge room which appeared to have one of your friends, Shade'

Shade: Hello you must be Toby...Arinira told me you were a newcomer to our town...are you perhaps investigating this place to save the little Burrly, Burgundy.

Yea....why?

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