FIRST OF ALL, this is an UPDATE of an animation I did in April. PLEASE see that here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7873561/ Please compare them; feel free to point and laugh at the original. I am.

Although FAR from perfect (and there are certain frames in this I can't stand) I think I've made some progress with Scar's nose. Like I said, nowhere near perfection but well...just look at the original version. o_o

Now, having admitted to the fact that I can see some improvements let me tear this new one apart with criticism. I'm noticing my mistakes faster and faster. XD

Everything feels out of proportion and I think it's painfully obvious. The feet look too small in comparison to everything else, and that bothers the hell out of me. I think I was too focused on the facial expressions here, as usual. Plus, it gets a little frustrating to draw the same thing again and again. XD

Size jumping. They grow and shrink in some frames, another issue I always have trouble with.

Tails are deformed, I know. Yknow I didn't even have Patches' tail in there at first but it felt like he was poking out from nowhere so I fixed that...or maybe just made it worse. :p

I can never just be happy with something. For all the thousands of errors in here, it's at least an upgrade from what I did just a little over two months ago.

I also did a version of this with a background, which you can see here: http://wahyawolf.deviantart.com/art.....tion-312369559

As always, Patches belongs to  Patches