Sometimes you don't want words to form. To just leave it be. However when they are there, you either write or go insane.
Oh... I forgot.... Poets are insane!
Take care,
Tye
Oh... I forgot.... Poets are insane!
Take care,
Tye
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Razor...
You’re showing a grand maturity for your age. Yes, absolutely pain is a part of life. We need pain to meter the pleasures that we experience so that we actually feel and understand the pleasures we experience. It's just there are times when the pain over rides all thoughts of pleasure. It's these times when we need a lift. All to often the fruits presented are rotten to the core.
Once again, thanks for your youthful wisdom. You’re coming along well!
Take care,
Tye
You’re showing a grand maturity for your age. Yes, absolutely pain is a part of life. We need pain to meter the pleasures that we experience so that we actually feel and understand the pleasures we experience. It's just there are times when the pain over rides all thoughts of pleasure. It's these times when we need a lift. All to often the fruits presented are rotten to the core.
Once again, thanks for your youthful wisdom. You’re coming along well!
Take care,
Tye
well done; this one is touching. Your final lines flow together really well despite your usual beat pattern, it is especially savory :}~
This poem inspires me once again to ask a question that im not sure is appropriate in public, so ill ask when i see you online again.
Once again, well written :}
This poem inspires me once again to ask a question that im not sure is appropriate in public, so ill ask when i see you online again.
Once again, well written :}
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