
Drawing rut. Trying to get out of. That is all. :B
Also haven't put Keisha and Sian in a drawing together. Remedied that.
Also haven't put Keisha and Sian in a drawing together. Remedied that.
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Sorry for the late reply Kye. It's nice to see you drawing again, and it's nice to see you've improved a little bit. I don't really feel (or want to) pick this apart, so I'll just leave it at I'm glad that you are indeed "getting back into the game." :)
I will leave a few general criticisms though. For example, how you draw hair. It's really...spikey, and I don't mean as in "anime spikey", but more like "doesn't really seem to flow" kind of spikey...if that makes any sense. \:p Also, the lines aren't always very clean (for example, your canine's hairline) and some aspects of your style seem wonky (such as her eye sticking out like that through her hair). That's stuff that's always been present in your style, but it hasn't really bugged me as much until now...maybe my eye for this stuff has changed, I dunno. :\ As Moom said to me one time in regards to my art, you're in that "awkward phase where you get most stuff right most of the time" but there's still room for improvement.
On the other hand, you did a really good job with the composition here, and the posing is very dynamic and eye-catching (well, there's other things eye-catching about this... >.>) The background has a nice design, and overall this is probably one of your better pieces. Not bad for some shameless cheesecake. :p
Glad you're drawing again. Cheers!
I will leave a few general criticisms though. For example, how you draw hair. It's really...spikey, and I don't mean as in "anime spikey", but more like "doesn't really seem to flow" kind of spikey...if that makes any sense. \:p Also, the lines aren't always very clean (for example, your canine's hairline) and some aspects of your style seem wonky (such as her eye sticking out like that through her hair). That's stuff that's always been present in your style, but it hasn't really bugged me as much until now...maybe my eye for this stuff has changed, I dunno. :\ As Moom said to me one time in regards to my art, you're in that "awkward phase where you get most stuff right most of the time" but there's still room for improvement.
On the other hand, you did a really good job with the composition here, and the posing is very dynamic and eye-catching (well, there's other things eye-catching about this... >.>) The background has a nice design, and overall this is probably one of your better pieces. Not bad for some shameless cheesecake. :p
Glad you're drawing again. Cheers!
I appreciate any comments whenever they come, so thanks again Moviedude! There are several things I need to practice on including hair, general anatomy (FREAKING STILL >:U), hair... Just need to keep pegging away at it all I guess. Actually, starting right now, I'm going to make a goal of getting a drawing done a week. Only way to get better is to draw and draw eh?
Thanks Moviedude
Thanks Moviedude
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