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Been a while since I posted something so here is a non-canon story written by 
Sylex about Shane's father getting ready to go up against :GreenLegend: I thought it was really good.
Shane, Brandon, and Duran belong to me.
Sylex belongs to Sylex
Green Legend belongs to
GreenLegend
Sylex about Shane's father getting ready to go up against :GreenLegend: I thought it was really good.Shane, Brandon, and Duran belong to me.
Sylex belongs to
SylexGreen Legend belongs to
GreenLegend
Category Story / All
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 84 x 120px
File Size 30 kB
Hmmm,
Nice set up, really captured that pre-bout fluttering of thoughts with the main character, Duran and elaborating nicely on his bit of personality, growing trials, and family life quite nicely to express him to the reader. And it certainly is interesting how you note Green's ~Green Dragon Fist~ as a "Green flame of Hope" , I really like the timber of that actually. Nicely worded. Between her and the mighty bear it is also cool they share a strong will as opponents.
Green is best known for two traits when she fights, her unbreakable determination and her amazing pain threshold. A real glutton for pain, knowing how to push forward for the right reasons to her physical limits. But it sounds like Duran could be the strong, humble fatherly sort to give some serious show of experience and stand-off power in the ring.
Very nicely done.
Nice set up, really captured that pre-bout fluttering of thoughts with the main character, Duran and elaborating nicely on his bit of personality, growing trials, and family life quite nicely to express him to the reader. And it certainly is interesting how you note Green's ~Green Dragon Fist~ as a "Green flame of Hope" , I really like the timber of that actually. Nicely worded. Between her and the mighty bear it is also cool they share a strong will as opponents.
Green is best known for two traits when she fights, her unbreakable determination and her amazing pain threshold. A real glutton for pain, knowing how to push forward for the right reasons to her physical limits. But it sounds like Duran could be the strong, humble fatherly sort to give some serious show of experience and stand-off power in the ring.
Very nicely done.
Oooooooooh
I almost missed that being noted above. Sorry about that.
**applauds** sylex ::applauds**
I almost missed that being noted above. Sorry about that.
**applauds**
sylex ::applauds** 
Yay I hope you like it.
The stats are just theoretical and since it ties with this story, it isnt canon in case the stats arent to your liking.
I saw some of Greens pics and she got really beaten up thats why I tried to make them semi-realistic.
Thesame counts for Duran but I probably exgerrated a bit >///>
The stats are just theoretical and since it ties with this story, it isnt canon in case the stats arent to your liking.
I saw some of Greens pics and she got really beaten up thats why I tried to make them semi-realistic.
Thesame counts for Duran but I probably exgerrated a bit >///>
Heh,
The boxing bunny in green has faced some tough trials and lost a good few fights over all the bouts I've had her in over the course of my time RPing on places like FURCADIA . She's known for two traits above all else, unbreakable determination and an amazing pain threshold, makes for one tough masochistic bunny to make 'stay' down.
The boxing bunny in green has faced some tough trials and lost a good few fights over all the bouts I've had her in over the course of my time RPing on places like FURCADIA . She's known for two traits above all else, unbreakable determination and an amazing pain threshold, makes for one tough masochistic bunny to make 'stay' down.
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