
So charged by the eternal king of the far North, captain Hekov and his lieutenant Torig set out with a small fleet across the ocean to scout the newly discovered land of Sharridgrur, and prepare the way for a further invasion fleet... ...a fleet that would never come.
Cut off from his Homeland, Hekov began to settle the coast as best he could, claiming the fjord-bordered peninsula he had landed upon as 'Roselade'. Upon the three high islands at its southern tip there came the 'Watchdogs of the South', Falgovir, Degori and Wulgade. Falgovir and Wulgade became famous among the settlers, and revered as mighty defending forces, for from the East there came the Dwallr, who had lived upon the land long before Hekov and his people had arrived, and from the West the forces of the Jundi, the high king of the Dwal. Degori lapsed into a state of unpreparedness, for from the Tusrud there came no Dwal or Dwallr; the barbarian natives seemed to avoid the vast, uncharted land to the south when they could, the land they called the 'Gulewild'. Why the natives of the Sharridgrur avoided the Gulewild the Colonists couldn't say; only that farmers they sent to populate the Tusrud would often become superstition, paranoid, and speak of strange things that would sometimes wander north from the misty wilds.
Cut off from his Homeland, Hekov began to settle the coast as best he could, claiming the fjord-bordered peninsula he had landed upon as 'Roselade'. Upon the three high islands at its southern tip there came the 'Watchdogs of the South', Falgovir, Degori and Wulgade. Falgovir and Wulgade became famous among the settlers, and revered as mighty defending forces, for from the East there came the Dwallr, who had lived upon the land long before Hekov and his people had arrived, and from the West the forces of the Jundi, the high king of the Dwal. Degori lapsed into a state of unpreparedness, for from the Tusrud there came no Dwal or Dwallr; the barbarian natives seemed to avoid the vast, uncharted land to the south when they could, the land they called the 'Gulewild'. Why the natives of the Sharridgrur avoided the Gulewild the Colonists couldn't say; only that farmers they sent to populate the Tusrud would often become superstition, paranoid, and speak of strange things that would sometimes wander north from the misty wilds.
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Welcome to the wonderful world of map-making!
Welcome to the slightly less wonderful world of map-making criticism!
...hey, totally unrelatedly, do you know of a good way to tell someone they need to work on their handwriting without sounding like a total bitch? I can't think of one.
Welcome to the slightly less wonderful world of map-making criticism!
...hey, totally unrelatedly, do you know of a good way to tell someone they need to work on their handwriting without sounding like a total bitch? I can't think of one.
Well... I've never been good with criticism. I'm always afraid of offending people. ...but hypothetically, I might say something like...
"Fenris you stupid mother-fucker, we can't read your god-damn hand-writing! The chicken-scratches you call words give us the impression you came here to FA right after you flunked out of grade-school!"
...to which this hypothetical Fenris might say "I think you've mentioned something like that before, yeah."
"Fenris you stupid mother-fucker, we can't read your god-damn hand-writing! The chicken-scratches you call words give us the impression you came here to FA right after you flunked out of grade-school!"
...to which this hypothetical Fenris might say "I think you've mentioned something like that before, yeah."
Weeeeeeeeell, it's not about legibility at all; it's perfectly legible. In fact one could say it's too legible. It needs more fancy! It's clear you were working on fancy (and limited by the scale of your moleskine) but I think it deserves more. Try drawing the letters instead of just writing them; I'm pretty sure controlled, patient motions will eliminate the majority of my hypothetical complaints. Another venerable strategy for making lettering look more auspicious is to use all capitals.
...finally, if you're really crazy you could try looking at other examples, Tolkein was heavily interested in insular scripts like this one and the Dark Crystal is easily invoked with middle English formal scripts like this one.
...finally, if you're really crazy you could try looking at other examples, Tolkein was heavily interested in insular scripts like this one and the Dark Crystal is easily invoked with middle English formal scripts like this one.
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