Hmmm, I think it have a more clockwork feel to it than factory enviroment...
But clockworks is the coolest machine type thnigs ever (especially giant steampunk ones)

Hehe... clockwork could work too <3 I think that's what I meant to say, anyway. *laughs*

Well, I've yet to find more details about the rpg world in question, maybe it's a clockwork factory, that'd be aweseome. Maybe you've discovered a whole new genre, steampunk industrial.

*grins* I love steampunk - I'm gunna have to run with that. = D

Me too, a favorite is large flying ships, like victorian ports, only in the air (or as is the case of Dineys Treasure planet IN SPACE! guess who sat drooling from the cool futuristic ship design and went home to scetch flying vitorian spaceship all the live long day?)
The interest has been kinda dormant for a while, but got rekindled recently by this guy
http://ericpoulton.blogspot.com/sea.....max-results=20
who inspired by this article http://blog.wired.com/gadgets/2007/.....unk_light.html decided to do Star Wars, steampunk version, f all his pics, this is my fav
http://bp2.blogger.com/_fYpsA3iAQDU...../LordVader.jpg
man, lord Vader looks even more cool as a clockwork robot!

Wow. That's *really* rad... I gotta check more of this stuff out, it's really amazing! Thanks for sharing!

He really have that 1920s style down, hasn't he?

really well done! I usually not fond of the music I find on FA, but this is well done (in my oppinion) I am marking it as a fav. I must wonder, did it ever really get used?

Hehe thanks. Nah, it hasn't been used yet - it's just a portfolio project at the moment.

I love the melody you've got here. I really do. It's incredible. I can't really describe it, but it's got that futile, oppressed feel.

The backbeat, however, seems a little too regular to be an overworked machine. It needs some extra noise and distortion to go with the melody. Perhaps some parts where it falters, or becomes strained would give it a little more character? Unless, of course, this isn't industrial revolution coal-and-smog industrial, but modern convenience industrial.

Apart from that, brilliant. Reminds me of some of "Beneath a Steel Sky".

Thanks! I'm really glad you dig it. = 3

Oh, wow.... It's so sad. It gives off a futile feel.
Very well-done.

Hehe, thanks hon. Yeah, it's supposed to sound like things are breaking down. I'm glad you like it. = 3

Whoa... this was pure ear-love. Great job! I love how this isn't a loop; great progression.

Thanks! Yeah.. this was a lot of fun for me to write... Glad you liked it!

I don't get the futile feel to this song, I start feeling more like things are impending and time is wearing down. The sounds aren't specific enough for a machine breaking down because the sounds are too fluid, but then I assume this might be for a game where the visuals would take care of that. Nice stuff though.

I just listened to this again - FA is totally speeding this up a lot faster than I intended. I'll have to kick at them later. Still, as it's a lot faster than it should be, in this new form it certainly does sound like "time is running out." Thanks for the comment. = )

Just a suggestion for for breaking down, maybe get sound samples of metal snapping or maybe make some of the sounds more disjointed.