So yeah. Wrote this as a spark of inspiration at 11 at night...i finished it just now at...12:15 at night. Yay. Sleep deprivation. Such a great combo with writing and stuff. I'm always okay with creative crit. So if you want to just leave some down below. Thank you so much for reading this. I hope you like it.
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 111 x 120px
File Size 16.2 kB
Interesting start, I was slightly off put when I saw my name, same spelling and all, but hey, happy coincident. In any case, all I really have to say in light if criticism is not to use pseudo curse words. It removes a certain professional feel from the story, other than that I've got no complaints. Keep up the good work.
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