Nice twist, Pyro! Lovely apocalyptic feeling in it too.

Glad you liked, and thanks!

I could feel the anticipation growing as I read and wasn’t disappointed. Nice work for under half an hour.

Thanks for the comment, and I'm glad you liked it!

Interesting (even though I saw the humans coming), and worth continuing, IMHO...

heh.. reverse fursecution.

Continuing? I'm not sure I can, myself...

What a marvelous mental image... very well done P. I really enjoyed it. Great twist.

V.

Glad you liked it! I was kinda thinking about this particular story for a while but was never able to get anything down... so far so good, though, I think.

I think so too... gives him another hug just because....

V.

*hugs back* ^^

I always enjoy a good post-apocalypt. And I love that first sentence: "Revan hated the wall." It's so bizarre, so frank. I daresay it's the best part of this, aside from the setting.

Now that's an interesting opinion... I really didn't pay too much attention to that first sentence after I typed it, heh. Just kinda went balls on after that. But I am glad, however, that I can write a good hook. Thanks for the comment and glad you enjoyed it!

Pretty interesting. This is worth continuing only because it leaves so many questions unawnsered. I have to say stories like this drive me nuts because ther potential is not met, but that is part of their allure- a brief picture of a space in time... A vivid one at that.

Honestly? Not sure I could continue this, heh...

This is very good, and for such a short read and such a short write, you say an awful lot. I envy you in that regard...though I did kind of the same thing with "Don't Spend Your Love on Me."

Sometimes you have an idea that can just as easily be said through one page as a three-hundred-page novel. This story could very well be part of a larger idea, much larger, but you have pulled off a near-impossibility: you have instructed us, as readers, in the whole universe you've made from yourself in a concise, deep, creative and complete way without giving extraneous information or cutting anything crucial out.

Well, well done. This was very enjoyable.

Whoo! I gots skill!

But sometimes, it just all falls into place, yanno?

Out of curiosity, which other stories are you reading of my humble collection?

You'll see; commenting as I go.

Very interesting. Gave me things to ponder. Nice revelation in the end. The reading experience was very nailing, I lived with Raven as I read this. Very good story.

Glad you enjoyed it!

Also, the character's name is Revan. It's very similar.

Sorry. Fingers faster than my mind. I also feel miserable when people forget the names of my characters and then point to them with wrong names. But this was a genuine typo. Revan. Heh, a rat named Raven. Wouldn't be so bad, actually.

I honestly don't mind that much, especially considering how close the two names are. If you, however, got it WAY off, then I'd have an issue and wonder if you even read the dern story, heh.

This is very nifty. I've seen the post apocalyptic scenario done a few ways, but this one really makes you think.

Very nice work, Pyro. ^ ^

Thank you, thank you. ^^