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Almost Easy (MLP FanFic) - Chapter 1: "Love Walks In" (.rtf)
Cause his life sometimes... is Almost Easy.
My first MLP fanfic, starring my OC (Calecune) , and soon to be a few of my friend's OCs... Proofread by StormkingArcana on DeviantArt who is AWESOME!
Cale and Misty look like this: http://ramenwolf1485.deviantart.com.....lery/#/d578cha
Chapter 2:
My first MLP fanfic, starring my OC (Calecune) , and soon to be a few of my friend's OCs... Proofread by StormkingArcana on DeviantArt who is AWESOME!
Cale and Misty look like this: http://ramenwolf1485.deviantart.com.....lery/#/d578cha
Chapter 2:
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Horse
Size 120 x 111px
File Size 37.5 kB
Lovely fanfic! =) I like the original love plot. Its a bit....tiring, reading fanfics that involve them falling in love with one of the main 6. But finally, a story to change that! ;D Although, that was a very quick couple hook up, not that its bad. Its just that if you build up time between two characters in a story, the reader will go "YES!!" once the moment where they finally get together comes. Just saying though =P
But that didn't stop me from reading! I like your story so far!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter pal
Oh! Also, I spotted a few mispellings. If you want, i'd be MORE than happy to edit your next chapter from spelling errors? (Forgive me for being such a grammer nazi -_-; it annoys me aswell)
I'm in the process of writing my own first mlp fanfic myself at the moment (and BOY, is it long)
But I'm taking a small brake from it. I've been typing away the past 6 days non-stop :s. But now I have time to edit your story, that is if you'd like me to?
But that didn't stop me from reading! I like your story so far!
I'll be waiting for the next chapter pal
Oh! Also, I spotted a few mispellings. If you want, i'd be MORE than happy to edit your next chapter from spelling errors? (Forgive me for being such a grammer nazi -_-; it annoys me aswell)
I'm in the process of writing my own first mlp fanfic myself at the moment (and BOY, is it long)
But I'm taking a small brake from it. I've been typing away the past 6 days non-stop :s. But now I have time to edit your story, that is if you'd like me to?
IT was orig. gonna be Twilight Sparkle... but due to this RP i did, this one just seemed better. I like it better too! The mane 6 will make an appearance... but it'll be breif, and none of them are even born at this point XD
(as for the spelling, i'll double-check... i tend to type rather fast, but if you pointed it out that would help as well!)
I'm glad you liked! Yoou don't know how this makes me feel!
(as for the spelling, i'll double-check... i tend to type rather fast, but if you pointed it out that would help as well!)
I'm glad you liked! Yoou don't know how this makes me feel!
I'm open for using anyone's OCs in it! I have like... 7 of my friend's OCs that will be in here. Yes, i asked... and all of mine as well... which is quite a few as it stands!
...this is the first one ive had anyone ever take any interest in... definately makes me wanna continue it!
...this is the first one ive had anyone ever take any interest in... definately makes me wanna continue it!
Ahh, characters. But since it seems like you have enough as it is, I'll leave you to continue your story!
Don't want to pile you up with more than you can chew!
First story, or last story, it doesn't matter. I know when I see a good story! And I'll let you know that this is one, and with alot more potential in it aswell, if you press the right buttons ;)
Don't want to pile you up with more than you can chew!
First story, or last story, it doesn't matter. I know when I see a good story! And I'll let you know that this is one, and with alot more potential in it aswell, if you press the right buttons ;)
A nice little story. I can't really offer anything in the way of critisism. I generally enjoy reading stories involving OCs. Speaking of OCs, I have you to thank for making Sky Flare, Star Shine, and Astralus a reality, because you were the first pony I ran into that provided a link to the pony generator.
I agree with all the points STW made; like on the lack of real romantic buildup and the few mispelled/missing words.
I also enjoyed this fic and look forward to more. All the characters are likeable and have fun little quirks that make them stand out.
This will be the 1st MLP fanfic i've 'read', so great job in making me interested in reading more in the future. ^^
I also enjoyed this fic and look forward to more. All the characters are likeable and have fun little quirks that make them stand out.
This will be the 1st MLP fanfic i've 'read', so great job in making me interested in reading more in the future. ^^
I figured... in reality this is based on a RP and really went a lot faster than that XD i tried to extend it enough but y'know. I don't write about love so... ya. Trust me. The RP went by way faster than this... we lept skipping years and months XD i MIGHT re-write this chapter and change a few things to make it better. I was pressed for time with this. Now that i have a laptop i have more time to devote to it instead of asking my parents to use the computer.
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