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Also known as "A Prelude to Preening" or "The Forgotten Sandwich" Though the actual type of sandwich that appears in the story is a bit ambiguous. I think it might be a tasty salami and cheese with fresh lettuce.
This is a rather fanciful tale about an unexpected encounter with a dubious avian fellow who may or may not be
kirkrapine. It's written in the second person perspective, so YOU are the hero! Or the hapless victim. Mostly the latter. I purposefully left our plucky protagonist vague enough to allow anyone to relate to the events of the story regardless or race or gender. I do hope that you like birds though! I suppose you'll have to do a bit of priority readjustment if you don't. Coping with permanent bodily transformations can be pretty rough sometimes.
FurAffinity is bizarre about how it accepts writing submissions... Since I didn't want to force people to download it I had to chang the submission file to a .txt. I ended up having to remove all of my formatting and change it to a word wrap format with each paragraph being its own line for this version. If you know a better way of posting things here please let me know!
Commissioner: seneca
Word Count: 3323
Characters: 18573
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This is a rather fanciful tale about an unexpected encounter with a dubious avian fellow who may or may not be
kirkrapine. It's written in the second person perspective, so YOU are the hero! Or the hapless victim. Mostly the latter. I purposefully left our plucky protagonist vague enough to allow anyone to relate to the events of the story regardless or race or gender. I do hope that you like birds though! I suppose you'll have to do a bit of priority readjustment if you don't. Coping with permanent bodily transformations can be pretty rough sometimes.FurAffinity is bizarre about how it accepts writing submissions... Since I didn't want to force people to download it I had to chang the submission file to a .txt. I ended up having to remove all of my formatting and change it to a word wrap format with each paragraph being its own line for this version. If you know a better way of posting things here please let me know!
Commissioner: seneca
Word Count: 3323
Characters: 18573
Shame: 0
Category Story / Transformation
Species Corvid
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 18.2 kB
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I love this idea! The mirror is truly the anti avian superweapon. It paralyzes them all with misplaced feelings of apprehension and curiosity. Oh gosh, just have a giant hall of mirrors as the entrance to your conan-villian castle. You'll never have to worry about losing your humanity (again).
I love this idea! The mirror is truly the anti avian superweapon. It paralyzes them all with misplaced feelings of apprehension and curiosity. Oh gosh, just have a giant hall of mirrors as the entrance to your conan-villian castle. You'll never have to worry about losing your humanity (again).
Ah, thank you so much! *dies from flattery* The second person perspective is pretty tricky to write in but I'm still surprised how uncommon it is in furry-relevant writing considering that most people read stories wanting to relate to certain fantasies. What better way than to relate those fantasies directly?
Kirkrapine has a few ways of deciding. People who truly annoy him will usually be turned into poultry or common sparrows. Beyond that he usually goes with a form that seems fitting for their appearance, attitude and the location. He's strangely particular about not transforming people into birds that don't naturally live in an area. I think he generally expects the newly transformed birds to settle down into a natural life. Also if your name begins with "M" he will transform you into a goose without exception.
Kirkrapine has a few ways of deciding. People who truly annoy him will usually be turned into poultry or common sparrows. Beyond that he usually goes with a form that seems fitting for their appearance, attitude and the location. He's strangely particular about not transforming people into birds that don't naturally live in an area. I think he generally expects the newly transformed birds to settle down into a natural life. Also if your name begins with "M" he will transform you into a goose without exception.
Oh thank you! That's certainly high praise.
I'm glad that you picked up on the "choose your own adventure" vibe because that's what inspired me to try writing more detailed prose in that perspective. Some of my earliest (and guiltiest) pleasures were those old and often terrible gamebooks.
I'm glad that you picked up on the "choose your own adventure" vibe because that's what inspired me to try writing more detailed prose in that perspective. Some of my earliest (and guiltiest) pleasures were those old and often terrible gamebooks.
Ah man, when I was young and had less of an outlet for my wild transformation fantasies I used to find gamebooks wherever I could in order to find transformation themed endings. I actually found a ton more than you might expect. I was always irked that they would just... end... at that point. I always found those sorts of endings to be more of a beginning. That's a theme that I should spend some time exploring, now that I think of it.
Go for it, man. Transformation's just neat in general, even if I didn't like to think about it so much. Since it's a fantasy setup anyway, there's never any reason for the story to definitively stop - especially when so much media is based around transformation as a core thematic element or the start of the plot arc. Take The Metamorphosis, for instance. There's a lot that could be done, and you should definitely try poking around with it if you feel so inclined!
A lot of my earlier writing was just form exploration. I still actually write it a lot though! It's part of the idea behind my character, Blackwell. Some people just get into transformation for the change itself, but I started from the aspect of just being the creature in question, sometimes not even as a transformation at all.
Thank you for the sincere and encouraging comments!
Thank you for the sincere and encouraging comments!
Oh thank you so much! I'm always happy to know when someone has enjoyed my writing. I do indeed write professionally but most of my writing is freelancing or furry commissions. I'm interested in writing something longer so a book might happen once I settle down on more than various whims and outlines.
If you'd like to see more writing i have a pretty big backlog of transformation stories that I haven't shared, I'd be happy to post some of them up.
If you'd like to see more writing i have a pretty big backlog of transformation stories that I haven't shared, I'd be happy to post some of them up.
I would love to see some more stories. Your writing has a certain charm to it compared to other tf stories, which often seem merely functional in getting to the the tf. I feel like if I came across a story of yours outside of your page, I'd be able to recognize it as being by you, and I appreciate that.
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