I think it needs to be just a tad brighter and more defined in colour o 3o

Yeah I was going for a colour theme, but I don't think it came across that well.

The only two things I can note are:
The lower legs/feet being positioned a tad odd, and
The highly varied level of definition. Like, the handle of the rake is very crisp, while the teeth are blurry. It makes sense between the focus and the background, but not on same thing.

oopess, forgot to fix that. I had to edit a few things. Thanks for the feedback

I would say that the background has a little too much detail going on and needs to be pushed back, also echoing what M-Ree said, the focus on several parts of the character looks a bit off. Also her boobs look proper massive, but if that's a character thing then forget I mentioned it. However, you've captured a really nice pastoral feeling with this - I really like what you're trying to do with it.

Personally, I wouldn't have this on my wall, but's that's because I wouldn't have anyfurry art on my wall.