This is the second chapter of my story. Really though it's just a continuation of the first chapter rather than a seprerate chapter unto itself, but whatever.
This one picks up directly where the last chapter ended. Some parts of this chapter I liked better. Some parts I liked worse. Hopefully it'll all even out. I was able to write this whole chapter a lot faster than the first one. The first chapter I started and stopped writing about 5 diferent times. I wrote this one all in one night. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not though, but at least it's easier. I guess I'm just getting the hang of it. I think maybe it could use a little more editing, but I could probably edit it for months and not get anywhere. By the time I posted the first chapter, this chapter was actually already finished and I didn't change much since then. I'm actually almost finished with the third chapter, too. There's finally some explanation in that one.
In any case, I hope you guys enjoy it as much as you enjoyed the first one. Again, if anybody has any problems or suggestions about my writing I'll be glad to hear them. I'm really looking forward to reading your comments. Enjoy.
Edit: Oops. Apparently I accidentally uploaded an older version of the story. I just uploaded the actual version. It's pretty much the same thing except without the underlining and some spelling fixed.
This one picks up directly where the last chapter ended. Some parts of this chapter I liked better. Some parts I liked worse. Hopefully it'll all even out. I was able to write this whole chapter a lot faster than the first one. The first chapter I started and stopped writing about 5 diferent times. I wrote this one all in one night. I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not though, but at least it's easier. I guess I'm just getting the hang of it. I think maybe it could use a little more editing, but I could probably edit it for months and not get anywhere. By the time I posted the first chapter, this chapter was actually already finished and I didn't change much since then. I'm actually almost finished with the third chapter, too. There's finally some explanation in that one.
In any case, I hope you guys enjoy it as much as you enjoyed the first one. Again, if anybody has any problems or suggestions about my writing I'll be glad to hear them. I'm really looking forward to reading your comments. Enjoy.
Edit: Oops. Apparently I accidentally uploaded an older version of the story. I just uploaded the actual version. It's pretty much the same thing except without the underlining and some spelling fixed.
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Lion
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 42 kB
Listed in Folders
Thank you guys very much :D . I'm really glad you guys liked it. It means a lot to me.
And what did I misspell? It's all my damn spellchecker's fault, turning "theer"s in "theirs" before I get the chance to notice. (unless it's the "it's" and "its" that I keep getting mixed up, those are completely my fault.)
And what did I misspell? It's all my damn spellchecker's fault, turning "theer"s in "theirs" before I get the chance to notice. (unless it's the "it's" and "its" that I keep getting mixed up, those are completely my fault.)
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