Nice work,Chris!....I saved it in my documents,btw.....I think it'd be very helpful if you wrote something about Dark himself,his life up to this point and how he fits into the Tenchi universe.And I don't think you should leave Polly out of this. You should write about her involvement with Dark,seeing as how the comic you mentioned is only a scrap. Then if you decide to do a full comic,you'll have your basic story on paper to refer to. Keep it up!

Thanks Rusty. I see, I see, You're right I should, I'll get to work on that. Thanks again Rusty. ^_^

My pleasure!....And I reread the Polly comic...So...Ryoko and Ryo-Oki are actually Sisters? And Washu is their Mom? ...And Ryo-Oki is now Human,and is famous for something?....You should write about this as well,I know I'm curious!

Yea, they are, everything except for Ryo-Oki being famous are facts from the Tenchi Muyo! Tv series. Okay then I will Rusty.