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Cause his life sometimes... is Almost Easy.
My first MLP fanfic, starring my OC (Calecune) , and soon to be a few of my friend's OCs... This is chapter 2.
Previous Chapter: http://www.furaffinity.net/controls.....einfo/8531815/
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My first MLP fanfic, starring my OC (Calecune) , and soon to be a few of my friend's OCs... This is chapter 2.
Previous Chapter: http://www.furaffinity.net/controls.....einfo/8531815/
Next Chapter:
Category Story / Fantasy
Species Horse
Size 120 x 111px
File Size 31.5 kB
I cant believe it ran out of room for the title -_-"""""""" Anyways, thanks! Spitfire, if you've seen the show, is actually one of 3 cannon characters from the show ive mentioned... the other two being Mac and Granny Smith. I'm avoiding a full interaction but Spitfire and a couple others will be an exception. I'm taking more time to carefully plan out chapter 3. Reading a few fanfics to get my mind going first.
I've watched the show, but have a hard time remembering the characters i don't see every 3 episodes. I wish i could fix that. I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter so feel free to take your time (Just speaking for myself. xDD). Reading others works usually works for me to get ideas and such and i hope it works for you as well.
This is like a gold mine of OC's. I enjoying seeing what others have come up with.
I actually do have a critique on this one. I found it strange that you had one paragraph stating that "Cale was content living without a house.", when one page later he asks to stay in the library and it states that he dreamed about "the fact that he finally has SOMEWHERE to stay for a change." Seems a bit contradictory in my opinion.
I actually do have a critique on this one. I found it strange that you had one paragraph stating that "Cale was content living without a house.", when one page later he asks to stay in the library and it states that he dreamed about "the fact that he finally has SOMEWHERE to stay for a change." Seems a bit contradictory in my opinion.
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