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This is the third installment of the series, as you might have guessed, and is actually more of it's own seperate chapter.
Once agains there were some things I liked more and some things I liked less about this one. This chapter focuses a lot more on dialogue and introducing characters than the first two, which was kind of weird to write. There's also a lot less 'action' in this one, sorry. He couldn't just keep getting stuffed forever you know, or could he...? In any case, I really hope you enjoy this one too. I even added a thumbnail in the hopes that maybe I could trick people into thinking it was actually a picture and clicking on it heh heh heh. That and I just wanted an excuse to post it, and it was slightly topical, much like my avatar.
If anybody has any errors to point out I'd be glad to hear them, especially in respect to names and pronouns and stuff. I Hope you like it and I'm looking forward to your comments :D
Edit:Man, twice as many views as my second chapter got and only within a half hour. My ploy must have worked :o
Once agains there were some things I liked more and some things I liked less about this one. This chapter focuses a lot more on dialogue and introducing characters than the first two, which was kind of weird to write. There's also a lot less 'action' in this one, sorry. He couldn't just keep getting stuffed forever you know, or could he...? In any case, I really hope you enjoy this one too. I even added a thumbnail in the hopes that maybe I could trick people into thinking it was actually a picture and clicking on it heh heh heh. That and I just wanted an excuse to post it, and it was slightly topical, much like my avatar.
If anybody has any errors to point out I'd be glad to hear them, especially in respect to names and pronouns and stuff. I Hope you like it and I'm looking forward to your comments :D
Edit:Man, twice as many views as my second chapter got and only within a half hour. My ploy must have worked :o
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Lion
Size 120 x 120px
File Size 41 kB
Listed in Folders
That thumbnail looks a lot like what Eric would look like after a gazelle stuffed down his throat, I'm sure. Looks lovely. ^^ I certainly wouldn't mind having/living out a dream like that, or even be able to go to an all-you-can-eat kinda thing. This has sparked my interest, even if it is Chapter 3.
-Ombre
-Ombre
*snickers* Very possibly that's one of this wuffy's old old OLD submissions to the fursize mailing list. Stellos and Vargr were having a friendly competition to 'fatten up' some real-life critters.
This wuff did some screen captures from Animal Planet, of a very well stuffed lion, and then "expanded" him even more.
Of course, wuff "lost" the competition to Stellos - that fellow was a wonderful artist and wuffy is only a 'paint shop pro technician'. *smiles*
Still, be it Vargr's original work or not, it's a perfect choice as icon for this story! Great work!
This wuff did some screen captures from Animal Planet, of a very well stuffed lion, and then "expanded" him even more.
Of course, wuff "lost" the competition to Stellos - that fellow was a wonderful artist and wuffy is only a 'paint shop pro technician'. *smiles*
Still, be it Vargr's original work or not, it's a perfect choice as icon for this story! Great work!
No need to ask permission - that artwork (if it IS wuff's) is well out in the public domain these days. Especially since the original came from a public TV episode. Glad you enjoyed the altered image so!
One day wuff really ought to crank up the old frame-grabber, and 'fatten up' a few more unsuspecting critters. *grins*
One day wuff really ought to crank up the old frame-grabber, and 'fatten up' a few more unsuspecting critters. *grins*
Vargr's been enjoying this story greatly, thus far. Very nice work. It reads easily, flows well, and any grammer errors, ets, are so minor that wuff didn't even notice them during the first read-through; the story held wuffy's interest so well.
Wuff has a special fondness for stuffing furs full and round and tight. *grins* Even more so to encourage them to eat even more than they thought they could hold. This certainly scratched THAT itch so far!
Vargr started a feeding story of his own, many years ago. With such inspiration as this, perhaps it'll encourage wuff to finally finish his own story and post it.
Thanks again!
Wuff has a special fondness for stuffing furs full and round and tight. *grins* Even more so to encourage them to eat even more than they thought they could hold. This certainly scratched THAT itch so far!
Vargr started a feeding story of his own, many years ago. With such inspiration as this, perhaps it'll encourage wuff to finally finish his own story and post it.
Thanks again!
I'm becoming worried about the well-being of Eric. He has the strong possibility of being vored by Michelle. And if I learned anything from reading fat furry stories, the hero doesn't always live through the story.
But ignore my yammering. Still a good 3rd chapter. BUT, I found a spelling error (gasp!). You misspelled "fit" as "fir". I forgot where, though, because I was enjoying your story so much I nearly forgot to correct it on my computer.
But ignore my yammering. Still a good 3rd chapter. BUT, I found a spelling error (gasp!). You misspelled "fit" as "fir". I forgot where, though, because I was enjoying your story so much I nearly forgot to correct it on my computer.
Cool! The twist continues!
Missed the constant forced feeding, but then the story would get boring over time.
Dream was cool!
Let me guess what comes next!
All the animals go to Michelle and it turns out that they had to eat to stay in the castle or something like that!
It is just a guess nothing else to all the other furs.
^__^
Missed the constant forced feeding, but then the story would get boring over time.
Dream was cool!
Let me guess what comes next!
All the animals go to Michelle and it turns out that they had to eat to stay in the castle or something like that!
It is just a guess nothing else to all the other furs.
^__^
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