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Sorry for the 3 day delay Justin, but I couldn't get on the internet! XD
And sorry guys, I don't know how much longer It'll last here. On at MC Donalds ATM.
And now that I have the chance...
A/N: Happy Birthday Justin AKA Justtrans4mme AKA JustParodiezMan, you big 20 year old you! Looking forward to your gift for MY birthday in two days! On a side note, to all you DA users: I will return one day, but until then, please, don’t ever forget me; because I, will return!
* * *
It was a cold night that night, and Justin was outside, taking a walk, trying to get ideas for what to transform people into in his comics. Overseas, was what could be the greatest person to ever live: RobtheMorpher, who preferred everyone to just call him Rob. Little did Justin know that in an alternate universe, Rob is a renowned Justice Hero, known for his bravery, his calmness, and his natural instinct to help those in need.
Justin looked up into the sky, and saw a shooting star! He heard that shooting stars are supposed to grant wishes, but that was only a myth. Still, it was worth a shot. So, Justin thought hard with all his might. I wish I could see Rob’s OC. Just then, Justin felt really sleepy for some reason. He had no idea why he did what he did, but he laid out on the sidewalk and went to sleep…
* * *
When Justin awoke, he felt weird. He, or rather, she, suddenly discovered why: Not only was she female now, but she was also a Jirachi! She had no idea what had just happened to her! She recalled what she did last night, but as she did, a man that turned her on came in through the door.
“Jicha, are you awake yet, I fixed you breakfast…” The man said. Justin had no idea why this man was calling her that, but somehow she knew that that was her name now.
“Yes, I’m awake. I’ll go eat now…” Jicha said. Her mind was telling her this man’s name was Rob, but the Justin that was still there said that this man had said nothing that resembled Rob.
“Ah yes, there’s also a birthday gift waiting for you out on the table Jicha. Picked it out myself.” The man said. That was the catch line right there. Last night just happened to have been the night BEFORE her birthday. She also remembers telling Rob that on the 17th she had a birthday…wait, only Rob and her other watchers, like Elliot, would KNOW that her birthday is on the 17th of August! Putting two and two together because Rob was going to do something extra special for her birthday this year, it all came down to just one possible identification that this man could be: Rob.
After Breakfast, Jicha wondered around here and there for the table when Rob helped guide her to it. Jicha was just not used to the giant building she was in, whatever it was. On the table, was a package, and inside it was a necklace and a note! Jicha read the note to herself and this is what it said:
Dear Justin, or should I say Jicha now? Either way…
I doubt you even realize where you are huh? You are in an alternate universe, parallel to our own. While you are here in this world, your body is resting in our world in your own bed. I guess I should tell you, my OC, Rob Snowden, used Polent Magic to place your sleepy body into your own bed. In that world, well…it is the world that is created by everyone’s combined imagination. Whatever we imagine happens in there as well. RPs, regular imagination, story imagination, it won’t matter; whenever we use our imagination, it happens in there as well.
Time is different in both worlds. While it may be daytime where you’re at, it is nighttime in our world.
After today, if you wish at any time to come to this world as you are displayed in it, just imagine being what you are at this minute while asleep, and let the waves of time do the rest.
I hope you have a very happy birthday when you return. As always, I hope you have a great day Justin. Your friend, RobtheMorpher AKA Rob.
So, the note just up and told Jicha straight up: She was in the world of imagination, and she will have to play the role of Jicha for a night in her own world if she wants to return to her world. That means, following the memories that come along with it.
* * *
After many events (including beating Dr. Dalfino), it was night in that world, so, Jicha went to sleep, and the next thing she knew…
…He woke up in his own bed. Strange, all he remembers laying down on the pavement at the park. Wait, it was all coming to focus…
Making that wish to the shooting star…
The note in his dreams last night…
The fact that his birthday is today…
He shook his head and went on FA before going to his birthday party. He saw that there was a submission on there from KingSimirrorV which is Rob’s account on FA called “A day (night?) to remember”, clicked on it, hit download and then found out that the dream he had last night, was more than just an ordinary dream…
…The waves of time…ever wait for the next person or group of people…to go to the world of great fortune…
…The world of imagination…
TO BE CONTINUED?
And sorry guys, I don't know how much longer It'll last here. On at MC Donalds ATM.
And now that I have the chance...
A/N: Happy Birthday Justin AKA Justtrans4mme AKA JustParodiezMan, you big 20 year old you! Looking forward to your gift for MY birthday in two days! On a side note, to all you DA users: I will return one day, but until then, please, don’t ever forget me; because I, will return!
* * *
It was a cold night that night, and Justin was outside, taking a walk, trying to get ideas for what to transform people into in his comics. Overseas, was what could be the greatest person to ever live: RobtheMorpher, who preferred everyone to just call him Rob. Little did Justin know that in an alternate universe, Rob is a renowned Justice Hero, known for his bravery, his calmness, and his natural instinct to help those in need.
Justin looked up into the sky, and saw a shooting star! He heard that shooting stars are supposed to grant wishes, but that was only a myth. Still, it was worth a shot. So, Justin thought hard with all his might. I wish I could see Rob’s OC. Just then, Justin felt really sleepy for some reason. He had no idea why he did what he did, but he laid out on the sidewalk and went to sleep…
* * *
When Justin awoke, he felt weird. He, or rather, she, suddenly discovered why: Not only was she female now, but she was also a Jirachi! She had no idea what had just happened to her! She recalled what she did last night, but as she did, a man that turned her on came in through the door.
“Jicha, are you awake yet, I fixed you breakfast…” The man said. Justin had no idea why this man was calling her that, but somehow she knew that that was her name now.
“Yes, I’m awake. I’ll go eat now…” Jicha said. Her mind was telling her this man’s name was Rob, but the Justin that was still there said that this man had said nothing that resembled Rob.
“Ah yes, there’s also a birthday gift waiting for you out on the table Jicha. Picked it out myself.” The man said. That was the catch line right there. Last night just happened to have been the night BEFORE her birthday. She also remembers telling Rob that on the 17th she had a birthday…wait, only Rob and her other watchers, like Elliot, would KNOW that her birthday is on the 17th of August! Putting two and two together because Rob was going to do something extra special for her birthday this year, it all came down to just one possible identification that this man could be: Rob.
After Breakfast, Jicha wondered around here and there for the table when Rob helped guide her to it. Jicha was just not used to the giant building she was in, whatever it was. On the table, was a package, and inside it was a necklace and a note! Jicha read the note to herself and this is what it said:
Dear Justin, or should I say Jicha now? Either way…
I doubt you even realize where you are huh? You are in an alternate universe, parallel to our own. While you are here in this world, your body is resting in our world in your own bed. I guess I should tell you, my OC, Rob Snowden, used Polent Magic to place your sleepy body into your own bed. In that world, well…it is the world that is created by everyone’s combined imagination. Whatever we imagine happens in there as well. RPs, regular imagination, story imagination, it won’t matter; whenever we use our imagination, it happens in there as well.
Time is different in both worlds. While it may be daytime where you’re at, it is nighttime in our world.
After today, if you wish at any time to come to this world as you are displayed in it, just imagine being what you are at this minute while asleep, and let the waves of time do the rest.
I hope you have a very happy birthday when you return. As always, I hope you have a great day Justin. Your friend, RobtheMorpher AKA Rob.
So, the note just up and told Jicha straight up: She was in the world of imagination, and she will have to play the role of Jicha for a night in her own world if she wants to return to her world. That means, following the memories that come along with it.
* * *
After many events (including beating Dr. Dalfino), it was night in that world, so, Jicha went to sleep, and the next thing she knew…
…He woke up in his own bed. Strange, all he remembers laying down on the pavement at the park. Wait, it was all coming to focus…
Making that wish to the shooting star…
The note in his dreams last night…
The fact that his birthday is today…
He shook his head and went on FA before going to his birthday party. He saw that there was a submission on there from KingSimirrorV which is Rob’s account on FA called “A day (night?) to remember”, clicked on it, hit download and then found out that the dream he had last night, was more than just an ordinary dream…
…The waves of time…ever wait for the next person or group of people…to go to the world of great fortune…
…The world of imagination…
TO BE CONTINUED?
Category Story / Transformation
Species Satyr
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 30.1 kB
Just read it. And I have to say that my anticipation was justified; this is actually really good, although it is a bit short. If I had to offer some advice, it'd be this; draw things out more. The existing story is really good, but I could see a lot of unused potential in this. For example, if you had Jicha wake up at the same spot she fell asleep on and went from there to figure things out, meeting a few OCs and stuff along the way, it could've gone from really good to freaking amazing. Another solution is to avoid transitions that skip over long time periods unless you intend to go back and explain; it would've been really cool to see Jicha testing out her powers now that she understands the dream world around her.
...And I'm nitpicking again. While it may be short, it's definitely fresh and welcome; Jirachi TFs of any kind are hard to come by. Overall: very good for a short birthday story, and I hope you do continue it someday!
...And I'm nitpicking again. While it may be short, it's definitely fresh and welcome; Jirachi TFs of any kind are hard to come by. Overall: very good for a short birthday story, and I hope you do continue it someday!
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