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So, this is my entry into the lovely 
the_kitty_named_terra's contest. So this is a story about her character Miyuki, and my character Caden meeting and sharing a little mutual interest. The ending was a little rushed here, but i was pressed for time so here's hoping its good enough!
the_kitty_named_terra's contest. So this is a story about her character Miyuki, and my character Caden meeting and sharing a little mutual interest. The ending was a little rushed here, but i was pressed for time so here's hoping its good enough!
Category Story / Fat Furs
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 50 x 50px
File Size 10 kB
XD It was such a funny story!! I mean.... Nobody around them was wondering how the lil boy suddenly started fattening Miyu-chan up? XD People sure are ignorant to not notice something that fat!! But anyways!! Well dun!! Thankies for writing!! And if ya dont mind, imma give some praises and some critiques! Like ive done with all the other stories so far too! X3
So!! The funniness part was clearly the center in this one! Atleast IMO. Because everyone around em seemed to be completely content with the fact that someone is bloating like a balloon right there. XD
THOUGH! This was a kinky storywriting contest afterall. The story was veeeery tame for something that should be kinky. So that might hurt it a little in the judgings!
In overall, it was still a very nice story! It was like.... an entry to a diary! Somehow...soothing to read!....even though you should never read other peoples diaries!! XD
So thankies for entering! And good luck!!
So!! The funniness part was clearly the center in this one! Atleast IMO. Because everyone around em seemed to be completely content with the fact that someone is bloating like a balloon right there. XD
THOUGH! This was a kinky storywriting contest afterall. The story was veeeery tame for something that should be kinky. So that might hurt it a little in the judgings!
In overall, it was still a very nice story! It was like.... an entry to a diary! Somehow...soothing to read!....even though you should never read other peoples diaries!! XD
So thankies for entering! And good luck!!
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