This looks so interesting c:

Impressive. So that's what you're talking about when you said "applying halftone looks so weird"!

And your English is very good! (Especially compared to another furry artist I know about.)

But I do wonder if you meant to use "reassemble" when you used "resemble".

*grammar nazi mode engaged!*

There's also ramdonly instead of randomly. It's also scattered instead of scattering because it is an event that's passed and not happening at this exact moment. Lastly, punctuation might need your attention a bit, you might want to look here for a very funny, but very good explanation on it: http://theoatmeal.com/comics/semicolon.

Your English is very good, and to be honest even better than some native speakers to be honest.

*end of grammar nazi rant*

Very nice art and a very intriguing dialog along with it, I hope to see more :)

Thank you so much for the suggestions! They are very helpful! >ω<
Still a lot of work to do but I'll try my best! Thanks!

Maybe I stare at the line art for too long time… Now it looks better for me. ￣▽￣
Oh yes I mean "reassemble", wrong spelling.