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More from Sparky the chu
with this sketch I decided not to focus on Sparky alone (who's there in the background, looking for a chance to attack) but rather on the main villain and hero of the game XIII, given how climatic and difficult the last battle was, so here we have Agent XIII on the right and his nemesis, the Mongoose on the left. while I still think the bodies feel too stiff I'm at least a bit pleased about the work on the faces...still...I need more work ^^;
review here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/3797061/
review here: http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/3797061/
Category Artwork (Traditional) / Fanart
Species Unspecified / Any
Size 1280 x 904px
File Size 161.6 kB
Arms could be a bit more portionate, being that it's the thing my eyes are drawn attention to first, also the elbow is twisted oddly in the sketch lines for 13, (in that position the forearm should be slightly twisted and the elbow facing the ground.) it's kinda flat as opposed to stiff, and is slightly off balanced to the head. Aside from that the pic looks good.
Actually the stiffness is what makes the picture stand out. It perfectly catches that moment of tension after the quick-draw when the good guy and the bad guy play mental speed chess with each other for a couple of seconds.
The one thing I have to point out is the head-to-hand proportion. Either their heads area bit too large, or their hands are too small for the rest of them. Pick one or the other, and that should help fix things a bit.
Also keep in mind: even when held straight-out, the arm still has curvature depending on how the item in the hand is held.
That's all from me!
The one thing I have to point out is the head-to-hand proportion. Either their heads area bit too large, or their hands are too small for the rest of them. Pick one or the other, and that should help fix things a bit.
Also keep in mind: even when held straight-out, the arm still has curvature depending on how the item in the hand is held.
That's all from me!
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